on but i was by nolan
18 Jul 2003, 4:21 PM
but you weren't?
on Mistaken Paradise by DJCARTER
18 Jul 2003, 4:19 PM
Gramaricaly abandoned.
on The Girl Who Is Gone by BuffysBack419
18 Jul 2003, 4:04 PM
"But she went to there to stay." My friend Vipersna invented this form, you are a thief! Nah, there are some interesting normal reactions to abandonment here, you are not alone, hang on, to this 6.
on Nigger Hole by horus8
18 Jul 2003, 3:26 PM
Must you say that naughty word that has nothing to do with skin color other than 1,ooo's of years of persecution and lies, death, humilty, fear. Because... Even words need to be set free from their sterotypage by generations of unimaginative flesh peddlars.
on beyond sences by calilegzzz
18 Jul 2003, 3:17 PM
At first I was going to glue this to my neighbor's face, but then I enjoyed your finally.
on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Jul 2003, 2:03 AM
"There where no pretenses made here" were, Bugger'd. I wont even bother fixing your attempt at spelling 'rhyme'. I can only wonder if god had the same idea when he put you here.
on In Loving Memory of Myself by Owner of the Sky
7 Jul 2003, 11:26 PM
A vibrator and a Von treirs movie might have saved your life.
on My Heart's Not Built Like That by Owner of the Sky
7 Jul 2003, 11:24 PM
Lovely.
on Repine by Owner of the Sky
7 Jul 2003, 11:10 PM
Well, you would know. You own it.
on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL
7 Jul 2003, 10:57 PM
I just read the comments to this poem, and did I ever laugh, good Christ, we are a sad bunch.lol.
on On Leaving an Awful Pub Job by razorgrin
7 Jul 2003, 9:54 PM
That's what I'm saying sweet cheecks.
replying on Freedom & Then some... by horus8
7 Jul 2003, 9:51 PM
Supreme Knowledge lived and Sincere understanding died. When I realized that was their names, I thought, jesus, that's fucking profound, I mean really , think about that.
replying on the godself within by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 4:43 PM
Yes, I feel the same way, but she's starting to stink up the room.
replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Jul 2003, 2:02 AM
17 syllables, words don't matter.
on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom
6 Jul 2003, 10:17 PM
When you fuck up a haiku, they roll out the red carpet. Great Christ in Saucer, abandon ship, he's never seeen an abacus.
replying on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
6 Jul 2003, 9:14 PM
Oh, well... I see. Good, well, as for a title it reminded me of the table where they feed you when you're filming a movie on location or at the studio, full of all kinds of naughty goodies. Carry on then, nice poem.
on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
6 Jul 2003, 9:11 PM
I would call it "Craft's Service" and try not to hang out there through the course of the shoot. (movie lingo)
replying on The Garden Island by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jul 2003, 9:09 PM
It was just the pinapple top, my young crusader, but there are some ants in Africa that can do that, if you're sleeping or drunk, of course.
replying on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jul 2003, 9:07 PM
Thank you, I just may.