on Belongings by Christof
23 Sep 2002, 9:10 PM
Another hit.
on Hearts End by grrund
23 Sep 2002, 8:55 PM
I don't get it. It seems like you wanted to be morbid but then there's the Zoom, Varoom, and Booms. Even if you were going for contrast I think they spoiled the mood. If they were simply to signify the car then I still don't like them. Other than that I like but they ruined it just enough for me that the 8 falls to a 5.
on For You by aperfecttool77
22 Sep 2002, 10:54 PM
[thumbsup] Good job. Glad you finally got in buddy.
on one childless girl by mallory180
22 Sep 2002, 2:06 PM
:( Reminds me of a friend of mine. (See "Whisper Under the Thunder") 10.
on the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi
12 Sep 2002, 12:06 AM
I happened to like it. Pay no attention to them.
on untitled #2 by darby pyn
8 Sep 2002, 8:54 PM
Good job. (Check for typos though)
on Winged Beauty by ThoughtfulSoul
12 Aug 2002, 10:03 PM
Poetandknowit sounds like a cranky arse to me. While I agree there are some poems that are not great here, yours deserves no such insults. It shows effort which is more than can be said for others.
on summer by itchiwitch
12 Aug 2002, 9:49 PM
Those last lines can be a pain in the ass.
on Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul
12 Aug 2002, 9:45 PM
I don't really see this as a lyrical poem but maybe I just missed the rhythm. Other than that I found it a nice poem.
Please comment about poems not people. (As a side note, if you are going to comment about others and make fun of their spelling please get a simple word like Canada right.)
Razorgrin I like the poem and I am familiar with the works of H.P. Lovecraft and Brian Lumley. The adventures of Titus Crow and the Cthulhu Mythos are great reads. Nice work.
Razorgrin I like the poem and I am familiar with the works of H.P. Lovecraft and Brian Lumley. The adventures of Titus Crow and the Cthulhu Mythos are great reads. Nice work.
on -=Dark_Angel=- & The Canon Episcopi by Bachus
9 Aug 2002, 12:14 PM
Great poem. That's if you're in middle school and still enjoy bickering. I hope you two kiss and make up at some point.
on recent submissions by <~>
1 Aug 2002, 8:38 PM
lmao. That was great.
on Impermanence by Corey McHattan
10 Jul 2002, 12:03 AM
"A headstone cold, and flowers bright,
Both decaying..."
That's actually something I've noticed before. I think you wrote a good poem here.
Both decaying..."
That's actually something I've noticed before. I think you wrote a good poem here.
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
9 Jul 2002, 11:59 PM
Good use of words but WOW. I hope you guys can get things together.
on Midnight Madness by Redfin
9 Jul 2002, 11:55 PM
I like it. Nice description. I tkind of describes how I feel after I've been up too long (although that's usually 9 or 10 AM instead of midnight.) Good work.
on To the Sea by timfowler
9 Jul 2002, 8:41 PM
As you already know, Dark Angel is an idiot. Good job.