on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2003, 12:37 PM
Often, I will wallow in the stench of my own gas. I'll protect myself and nostril flare me a force field of sheer french fried will.
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2003, 1:00 PM
mewl.
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2003, 1:02 PM
Clang clan clonk bonk clink rattle thaboing.
on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361
19 Oct 2003, 1:40 PM
Bleu... I firmly agree with your sound stance on these most serious of subjects. I know first hand the tribulations and suffering that compounds one's ability to deal with reality while in the grips of denial. See, last week, my baboon came down with ebola Bleu, and the economy of my third world island? Collapsed, not to mention my poor perfect 90 year old grandmother is not perfect anymore since she caught aids from a botched hair transplant. Bleu, you are a poet and wise to fight the system so. You are a super trooper young man. A super! trooper. I however am drunk and moments away from being shot in front of a firing squad for squandering my peoples assets and fornicating with their livestock and sons and daughters. Forgive me Bleu.
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2003, 11:55 PM
One of your best.
on living room by elmundo
10 Oct 2003, 5:45 PM
Sounds more like the pantry.
on Their Eyes by venusdemilo
10 Oct 2003, 5:46 PM
Wow, that's an original thought.
on Midnight Delight (a sexual sequal) by crims0ngh0st
10 Oct 2003, 5:35 PM
An opera of teenage hormonal implamentation. A warm cup of boob juice with a dash of bat pee and a smattering of worm hair. 10!
on Your Smile by ARTIE
10 Oct 2003, 5:37 PM
Like a bent uncut penis doing it's dirty work in my colon.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 5:38 PM
ha haa ha ah aaa. i'm sorry, but you should write comedy. you're really good.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 5:39 PM
This isn't poetry. It's barely a warm journal entry.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 5:41 PM
A case of internal chicken pox and no bus fare.
on Conquered Innocence by muted_screams
10 Oct 2003, 5:44 PM
Self masturbation on an elementary level.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 5:48 PM
Great promise, but in need of an edit and more buffing for the clarity behind the notion.
on Acquaintance by NeeMan
10 Oct 2003, 5:49 PM
Seriously not bad.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 5:55 PM
Good god you are a sad case. get over it, it's horribly boring and nothing new.
on The Baby Sponge by ruella
10 Oct 2003, 6:06 PM
And what of the purple bruised urchin when it comes lurchin into a yard full of Sod!!!!
on The Censor by Corey McHattan
10 Oct 2003, 6:06 PM
That, and puppy fucking.
on Where are my Spectacles? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
10 Oct 2003, 6:13 PM
Up your arse?