replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 3:02 PM
No thanks, I have lot's of big windows, and a lovely backyard. Plus I am at work, well, I have to do a movie at the end of the month and play a show at the bigfoot lodge, but other than that this is what I do currently, I'm at my desk, in my beautifully well lit (naturally, of course) Den/Frontroom finishing up my book and writing two movies. One for Carlos Diegus and one for this flaming filipino friend of mine. Therefore, forgive me if I cackle at you and say "Lick my scrotum freak!"
on Under Blood Oak by horus8
3 Oct 2003, 2:18 PM
A sad bitter leif Garret
on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 2:17 PM
I most often make myself laugh the hardest.
replying on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik
1 Oct 2003, 4:28 PM
ha ha ha ha, yeah, well, atleast I have the guts not to delete mine. ::AGIANTYAWN/SIGH::
replying on Death, last resort of protection by TheVoiceless
30 Sep 2003, 7:29 PM
God, did that ever hit home with me. lol
replying on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik
30 Sep 2003, 6:25 PM
An appocalypse now poster, by a very famous Japanese artist.
on Deceit by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
30 Sep 2003, 5:13 PM
I simply adore the way you blatantly ponder the relevance in defining style. That, and my honey fetish allowed me to vote high for this regardless of the style spanking pieces.
replying on Pin worms and cake. by baphomet
29 Sep 2003, 5:32 PM
no im in the 6th.
asshole.
who asked for your opion.
anal bead.
asshole.
who asked for your opion.
anal bead.
on Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet
20 Sep 2003, 12:29 PM
Don't take his anti drug propaganda to heart young one. Even Ashcroft likes a cocaine enima once in a while. the problem with dark angel and drugs is simple, notice.
Wheelchair no sexlife
__________ X ____________ = A BAD TRIP
constipation Mechanical charisma
Could you imagine?
Da, (in mechanical voice tripping balls) -- Waht are you staring at?
7-11 guy -- (hindu voice) pardon me please?
Da-- I said what are you staring at towel head, quit looking at me like you want to buff my spokes, or clean my trachianomy tube vishnu, DAMN YOU. (he hits the button to activate his evacuation harness)
Hindu #2 -- That gross fucking mechanical dolly enbrowned my freshly waxed an sealed linoleum. I hate 4x4 with harnesses an angels, especially when they are stoned.
Wheelchair no sexlife
__________ X ____________ = A BAD TRIP
constipation Mechanical charisma
Could you imagine?
Da, (in mechanical voice tripping balls) -- Waht are you staring at?
7-11 guy -- (hindu voice) pardon me please?
Da-- I said what are you staring at towel head, quit looking at me like you want to buff my spokes, or clean my trachianomy tube vishnu, DAMN YOU. (he hits the button to activate his evacuation harness)
Hindu #2 -- That gross fucking mechanical dolly enbrowned my freshly waxed an sealed linoleum. I hate 4x4 with harnesses an angels, especially when they are stoned.
on Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim
20 Sep 2003, 11:57 AM
It's good, but it aint that good. 7.
on The Uraeus (title by horus) by Y2kSlamPoet
20 Sep 2003, 11:52 AM
Nicely done.
replying on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik
20 Sep 2003, 11:34 AM
Next time, put it in "" from the beginning, otherwise, it looks just like the word 'inconceivable'. Or incrucible starring a red flyer agon and a pair of long johns.
on MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
20 Sep 2003, 12:46 AM
Rad.
replying on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik
20 Sep 2003, 12:38 AM
You do not think so? That Aliens messed with our dna to make us hybrids to work harder, better and live longer?
on Boys with Guns by Hostileintent
19 Sep 2003, 5:08 PM
[_] AABB rhyming scheme
[_] About romantic love
[_] About poetry-writing
[_] About suicide or self-mutilation
[_] Arbitrary indentation
[x] Arbitrary line breaks
[_] Autobiographical but in the third person
[_] Clerical errors
[x] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair)
[_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.)
[x] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments
[x] Devoid of rhyme
[_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices
[_] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery
[_] Drug references
[_] Elves, unicorns, etc.
[_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits'
[_] Insipidly whimsical or zany
[_] Leaving rant
[_] Lower case only
[x] Melodramatic
[_] Naively religious or superstitious
[_] Obsessed with femininity
[_] Overabundance of ellipses
[x] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc)
[x] Pointedly unanswered questions
[_] Protagonist has a smug name
[_] Rage against the machine
[_] References to the author's 'social life'
[x] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea
[x] Sanctimoniously moral
[_] Sentimental
[_] Self-pity
[_] Thesaurophilia
[_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons
[x] Vicarious wish fulfilment SPA
[_] About romantic love
[_] About poetry-writing
[_] About suicide or self-mutilation
[_] Arbitrary indentation
[x] Arbitrary line breaks
[_] Autobiographical but in the third person
[_] Clerical errors
[x] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair)
[_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.)
[x] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments
[x] Devoid of rhyme
[_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices
[_] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery
[_] Drug references
[_] Elves, unicorns, etc.
[_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits'
[_] Insipidly whimsical or zany
[_] Leaving rant
[_] Lower case only
[x] Melodramatic
[_] Naively religious or superstitious
[_] Obsessed with femininity
[_] Overabundance of ellipses
[x] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc)
[x] Pointedly unanswered questions
[_] Protagonist has a smug name
[_] Rage against the machine
[_] References to the author's 'social life'
[x] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea
[x] Sanctimoniously moral
[_] Sentimental
[_] Self-pity
[_] Thesaurophilia
[_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons
[x] Vicarious wish fulfilment SPA
on Thunderbird and Maledict by Don-Quixote
19 Sep 2003, 5:04 PM
[_] AABB rhyming scheme
[_] About romantic love
[_] About poetry-writing
[X_] About suicide or self-mutilation
[X_] Arbitrary indentation
[X_] Arbitrary line breaks
[X_] Autobiographical but in the third person
[X_] Clerical errors
[_] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair)
[_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.)
[_] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments
[X_] Devoid of rhyme
[X_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices
[_] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery
[_] Drug references
[_] Elves, unicorns, etc.
[_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits'
[_] Insipidly whimsical or zany
[_] Leaving rant
[_] Lower case only
[X_] Melodramatic
[_] Naively religious or superstitious
[_] Obsessed with femininity
[_] Overabundance of ellipses
[_] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc)
[X] Pointedly unanswered questions
[_] Protagonist has a smug name
[_] Rage against the machine
[_] References to the author's 'social life'
[_] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea
[X_] Sanctimoniously moral
[X_] Sentimental
[X_] Self-pity
[_] Thesaurophilia
[_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons
[_] Vicarious wish fulfilment SPA
[_] About romantic love
[_] About poetry-writing
[X_] About suicide or self-mutilation
[X_] Arbitrary indentation
[X_] Arbitrary line breaks
[X_] Autobiographical but in the third person
[X_] Clerical errors
[_] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair)
[_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.)
[_] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments
[X_] Devoid of rhyme
[X_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices
[_] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery
[_] Drug references
[_] Elves, unicorns, etc.
[_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits'
[_] Insipidly whimsical or zany
[_] Leaving rant
[_] Lower case only
[X_] Melodramatic
[_] Naively religious or superstitious
[_] Obsessed with femininity
[_] Overabundance of ellipses
[_] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc)
[X] Pointedly unanswered questions
[_] Protagonist has a smug name
[_] Rage against the machine
[_] References to the author's 'social life'
[_] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea
[X_] Sanctimoniously moral
[X_] Sentimental
[X_] Self-pity
[_] Thesaurophilia
[_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons
[_] Vicarious wish fulfilment SPA
replying on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik
19 Sep 2003, 5:00 PM
Literally, on Atlantis.
replying on reflexion v.3 - Cannibalization and Twilight by Don-Quixote
19 Sep 2003, 4:56 PM
[X] Thesaurophilia ha ha haaaaaa woah ah haa ha ha hee he.
replying on Oedipus' last glass of bubbles by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Sep 2003, 2:59 PM
Haikus don't usually rhyme, but i go both ways, but vilanelles do, and I love writing vilanelles and Sonnets and Sestinas, how about you? have you written anything out of your normal comfort zone of freeverse? If not? do, you'll love it. It's a great way to stretch the form, and your creative juices.