poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Shardik (261-280) and replies

Comments byShardik, 261–280 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

You should teach him how to stand on his face, 'professionally', like you do.
replying on Fridge by Birdpia 11 Sep 2003, 7:38 PM
Yes, the dark one sums it up beautifully, I do confess.
My mom's a nurse that helps people die. She's columbian German and i have an Oedipus complex. We she each other very rarely.
About what?
on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge 1 Sep 2003, 6:03 PM
Fuck god and fuck you, no really, I'm kidding I write poetry like this a lot when I feel, SATAN is working against me or through me like in the summer of sixty poo when I was alone and depressed. that's when I found heaven was the backseat of ford granada with a heater called 'windows'.
on Oldfinger by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1 Sep 2003, 5:50 PM
You were right. Thank you.
on A Lovely Surprise by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 1 Sep 2003, 5:37 PM
Indeed
on My Might by Birdpia 25 Aug 2003, 8:35 AM
Overbite
on Lizzie Boredom by Bonehiss 25 Aug 2003, 8:32 AM
I rather enjoyed it.
on The Better of the Sea by abecedarian 20 Aug 2003, 7:20 PM
I once sailed to Catalina with my friend, and the boat started leaking and i screamed like a crooked wristed woman and run amuck in a tiff.
replying on Upon a falling star (new/changed) by LuckyJoe 20 Aug 2003, 7:10 PM
Now we have something in common. Because, when I laugh hard enough to fart and gag? It's usuall upon recollection of your face and your bovine poetical tamponing.
on Upon a falling star (new/changed) by LuckyJoe 20 Aug 2003, 7:08 PM
If I hadn't already parodized this, I would.

L3 is crapped up.
and l7-the end is
hard to read without sleeping.
replying on Upon a falling star (new/changed) by LuckyJoe 20 Aug 2003, 7:06 PM
You mean cpr and shock padles, right?
on Wha you funkin wan? by ==Doylum 20 Aug 2003, 4:54 PM
Manuensis with a side of hot musturd.
on Provacation by J.B. Manning 20 Aug 2003, 1:44 PM
Keep on trucking.
replying on Under a better bed wetter by Shardik 20 Aug 2003, 1:12 PM
It's a parody of John K's under the weather. Ah, that'd be about five or six poems down on the recent chart.
on Love-Anemic by dragonfly 20 Aug 2003, 1:09 PM
This is a lyric and it's barely a seven.
replying on Love-Anemic by dragonfly 20 Aug 2003, 1:07 PM
You mean the deaf poetry slam on Nigger. B. O ? With Brussel Simmonoxymorons? Good lord that is flattering.
on \The Moment/ by Son Of A Bitch 17 Aug 2003, 11:16 AM
What exactly is a carcase of snow?
I would add a penny and a monkey named Lenny, Spruce.