poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Shardik (321-340) and replies

Comments byShardik, 321–340 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer 24 Jul 2003, 1:06 AM
Emphasis on the uncompromising rebellious nature you sadist, not the street, geez.
replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 24 Jul 2003, 1:02 AM
Six below that is one in a cell phone ring variety? Odd, to say the least, in fact gruesomely disturbing like frozen vomit on the side of a car.
replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 10:47 PM
A poem that beckons and warns, a talisman charged. A lighthouse bed with thin sheets and emberring fire gone red,
conserving itself for death in the morning after hot tea.
replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 10:43 PM
Loki's son is one, also known as Jagerhaunde, and Shen Ring.
replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 10:42 PM
No! Never! Are you?
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 23 Jul 2003, 10:19 PM
That's a lie. i've never gloated about my linguistics you oof. Even I know that grammar and spelling were never my strength, and often I let that be known, as I am now, for instance. I've boasted on imagination and structure development, and as with many, many, many, of my other satirical pieces that I do, in jest, I focus on many more prudent theoretical aspects involved with writing poetry. Such as the title and characters. Notice how this one brought in fifteen votes in an afternoon, though it's a heaping pile of huspux readings. That's half of your entire combined collection practically on the ranker. Ponder that, and next time you attempt to approach me like some sort of Bow tie pusher, think again, because, I don't believe we are on the same page, therefore, we seem to be having sort of miscommunication, or perhaps that was your attemp at seeming witty, however, it was tossed due to your absolute void of wit.
replying on Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik 23 Jul 2003, 10:06 PM
I'd wager you were lost at birth.
on Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer 16 Jul 2003, 12:45 PM
Very good, I'm proud of you, you've done it.
on Pretzel by daryash-koh 16 Jul 2003, 12:38 PM


Show me the leader whose eyes can withstand
The gaze of dead faces that leather in sand.
Blood on the lintel, and bile upon mat,
This is the suite where bellies grow fat.
Crimp the young shoots and press on by the nose,
Shiny green beetles shall devour your rose.
on Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey 16 Jul 2003, 12:36 PM
A wonderful thought.
on By children's mouths come intelligence by bondjedi 16 Jul 2003, 12:34 PM
Hippo manure grows things well, but they kill their young.
on Humans by snjofridur1 16 Jul 2003, 12:28 PM
Geomancy, good stuff.
replying on Hippy chic under the bleachers by Shardik 16 Jul 2003, 12:22 PM
I am fond of Don Quixote, not Ron Jeremy.
replying on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik 15 Jul 2003, 7:46 PM
I heard you'll work for food... I have a can of spam I could give you if you'll suck my ten inch black cock. "helpful" on that, cunt .
on vacation by geewhiz1962 6 Jul 2003, 6:14 PM
You act as if you've been moonlighting as a poet, and are just exhausted... Poor dear.
replying on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6 Jul 2003, 6:12 PM
I like it so far, don't be critical, it makes me blush.
replying on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II 6 Jul 2003, 6:08 PM
Than who might you be?
replying on Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik 3 Jul 2003, 2:03 PM
Three what, poemes Doug? "Look everybody, our laddie fancies himself a poet, a poet everybody" Pink Floyd, circa. 1982.
replying on Snow Coning by Shardik 3 Jul 2003, 11:46 AM
Come on... He's too curious. You remember how much trouble we were in at the age of four? He's oblivious and surrounded by BBQ-ing Latinos named Chewia & Nina. He'll be fine, always. I'm the one usually begging him for attention, ironically.
I do believe sir this news to be false. I have all Macs not pcs. I read your History paper Nick, It was great. I'm going to have to plagerize it, naturally. Please, forgive me. Do you know what the B. stands for? Beakism.