on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
7 Jul 2003, 1:32 PM
Happens all the time. I've already lost three that way this week.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 12:50 PM
Talk about a picture being worth a thousand words. -10-
on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:36 AM
I think pissing you off was his point. He lives for it. Good Vilanelle by the way. -9-
on SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM
Whats sad is I'm amused by this.
on Broken by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:30 AM
Touching, but lacks enough expression of rage and anger to go with all the broken things. -8-
P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
on On A Night Like This by bazz
10 Jul 2003, 6:27 PM
Have you ever heard of banal me lad? Look it up cause this is a great example.
on some deleted poem
11 Jul 2003, 9:24 AM
Buddist can be such silly silly beings. I really think that this could be applied to any incident involving opression or terrorism. -8-
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 1:03 PM
I'm not even sure what to think. Weird is all I can say. Fucking Weird. -5-
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 1:13 PM
Now then if I could only make my penis bend that way.. Umph... Errrg... OUCH!!!!!, Settle could we just take turns in back? pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 1:15 PM
Ah... I was hoping for something better.
on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 1:21 PM
Wow. I'm impressed by the author's note. Well done, and very informative. You deserve a Maturity Harness... Oh Yeah we don't have any of those. Well here since I couldn't offer one of those, have a D.A. style ten. -=1_0=-. ;)
on Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II
8 Jul 2003, 1:29 PM
Poor you.. I pity your pain, for being mistaken as one of the best poets, on the ranker. How sad.
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2003, 10:25 PM
Ouch. All the comma, periods, quotes and other marks, hurt my eyes, and the simple Why Why, questioning mentallity, aren't really working out to well for you. Not to mention that its really hard to follow what your saying. I'd vote but I'm in too good a mood to give this a zero. Try rewriting it. There is a hint of depth as to whom its written to but be more specfic. Your poem needs to be either more vague(so that it can be applied to anyone) or more detailed(so that it doesn't leave your reader shaking their head going "wtf", and I don't mean in the good way either).
on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme
6 Jul 2003, 8:36 PM
I like the way you gently tap on the emotional heart string here. Very nice poem. -8-
on vacation by geewhiz1962
6 Jul 2003, 8:42 PM
Please lie and tell me you put no effort into this(cause I already belive you). Its too short and reads very dry. Read the Queen and the Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos. Same Idea(sorta, I think but its hard to tell with Horus8), much better done.
on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme
6 Jul 2003, 8:47 PM
Very thought provoking. -9-. Even though you ryhmed zen with pen.
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2003, 8:53 PM
Hmmm... Right. Did, I miss something? Is somebody reaching out of their depth here to make a piss poor shot at being clever and witty, when they really don't have much to say? Cause it feels like it.
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2003, 9:55 PM
Satire, Sarcasism, being a smart ass. Whatever you call it None do it better than you(well actually some do but we'll let this be your moment, Okay?). -9-
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
6 Jul 2003, 10:15 PM
Indeed. Well said. A story well told, as only a slightly seasoned truth can be. -10-
on Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 11:50 AM
You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-