on -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw
26 Jun 2003, 11:48 PM
You've got to be shiting me, or gold bricks. Which ever you prefer.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 9:55 AM
Nor does it prove that they don't. 0's prove nothing, in fact, But still very good. Just for making me think -10-.
on -=Dark_Angel=- -=In_Decline=- by wEdible Underpantsw
26 Jun 2003, 11:54 PM
You still are D.A., You still are.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 10:15 AM
Everyone else here apparently missed it but the actual words thrown in at the sides is a very nice touch. I almost gave this a 5 but the words at the side was a clever bit, you sly devil you. -10-
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 10:22 AM
I want you, Forgive you, and I love you are all I made out and I'm not even sure about the forgive you. I don't forgive you. My eyes heart like a mother fucker. -9- for being clever, minus -2- for the eyestrain, so -7-
on your great by GAY AS FU*K
1 Jul 2003, 9:46 AM
Nice user name.
on Poem Ranker by abecedarian
1 Jul 2003, 9:52 AM
I hereby proclaim you the greatest poet laureate
ever to type a poem into a text box. Your Poem is so great. Really. Well I'll admit its funny if nothing else. Sad but funny. Seeing as to how you don't have one yet, -7-. To make your collection of numbers a little more complete.
ever to type a poem into a text box. Your Poem is so great. Really. Well I'll admit its funny if nothing else. Sad but funny. Seeing as to how you don't have one yet, -7-. To make your collection of numbers a little more complete.
on he's so good looking by GAY AS FU*K
1 Jul 2003, 9:58 AM
An -8-. Funny and Creepy.
on Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme
30 Jun 2003, 7:21 AM
Don't feel bad. I ate yoda's dorito's and he got really postal. Welcome to the Ranker Dreamer. Beware the many names of Horus8. One of the best writers(I feel he's as good as D.A. but lacks the proper Malice in order to defeat our winged one) and a damn good musician. He's good on not being harsher than you deserve, and fucking brilliant. I'm giving this an -8- cause its funny and happens to alot of newbies here. Welcome to the club.
on Sage by DreamerSupreme
30 Jun 2003, 7:38 AM
Still flailing, a nice attempt but so cold. No emotional depth to give it some feeling. Feels like its written by a machine. Even though its not it reads quite banal. -4-
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2003, 7:49 AM
Yig! Infuriatingly mixed. I love the last stanza but I didn't really care for the rest. Hated the first 2 stanzas. The parts are nicely done such as
"Bringing the flames
Over the fields
Where children play games"
But others make me want to have the WHORE stab my eyeballs such as
"All fools thinking
Their off the hook
Fooled by their drinking
The king comes
With the long sharp
Dagger of pain
He has gone insane
All actions before
Done in vain"
-6-
"Bringing the flames
Over the fields
Where children play games"
But others make me want to have the WHORE stab my eyeballs such as
"All fools thinking
Their off the hook
Fooled by their drinking
The king comes
With the long sharp
Dagger of pain
He has gone insane
All actions before
Done in vain"
-6-
on Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos
22 Jun 2003, 9:39 AM
Damn I just thought some body threw that wig out! I knew I should have found out whom it was. Pity me. Insanely funny by the way. -10-
on Elephant Man by Kitch
22 Jun 2003, 9:54 AM
Well written, but seems more a lyric to me(or at least thats how I imagine it). -8-
on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus
1 Jul 2003, 10:25 AM
PRETTY DAMN FUCKING GOOD!!!
on Women Fight Dirty by scitz
22 Jun 2003, 9:46 AM
Indeed they do.
And shouldn't it be feces?