The ghost stanza, is nice but just doesn't seem to fit. Look at the rest of the poem. You are talking about torture, bravery, slavery, morality, and etc., etc. The Idea of a spirit, the soul of a being that is supposed to have passed on, just doesn't work right here. Don't get me wrong you've thought it out well. Depth, you have here like nobody's business. The main reason, I feel that ghost doesn't belong? You need a better verb than are. Your other Stanzas, have a verb that is both appropriate, and futher builds the desire to read on(Well other than the one about the poet, for some odd reason look just doesn't go right there). I do not feel that the ghost stanza is a masterpiece, not compared to how I see the rest of the poem. Try copying this into word, or notepad, or whatever you write in, and try, just deleting the Poet and Ghost Stanzas. If you don't like it fine by me, but I like it much better that way.

Yes, its about reacting to things. Some times we lose control and black out, only to find ourselves doing something we would never imagine. After the absolute fury, our inner beast is done, and the chemicals are gone, there can be nothing but remorse.

Just so that you know, I'm not picking it up.

Yeah, sad really but look at the first word of every line.

Yeah, but that shit happens to me alot, and I'm still furious over it, but I'll manage. I just changed my hair again. Instead of a pink streak, I now have the front dyed blonde, while the rest is still just the same old dark brown I was born with.

You should have, it'd have been funnier.

Never had amberbock, I do like Diablo, and Captin Morgan's Gold. Everyother beer I've ever had, Tasted like shit. I love my smirnoff.

Awe.. Your such a darling, and a musician too. If only I had a vagina to call my own to rape you with. *sigh*

If you knew anything, you'd know I'm too stupid to read warnings.