replying on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr
20 Jul 2003, 6:21 PM
Obviously
replying on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr
20 Jul 2003, 6:21 PM
If you do just make sure to let me know where to download it.
on The first time in forever by Jeremi B. Handrinos
20 Jul 2003, 5:26 PM
Wow. Just when I think you can't shock me anymore *BLAM*. Nice.
replying on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr
20 Jul 2003, 5:23 PM
Hangover? I'm just lucky I don't get them, Cause from what I saw this morning, they are worse than being a man at a PMS convention.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Jul 2003, 3:43 PM
Hmm.. Meta-poetry. I thought that was a trend started late 18th century that died out til about the early 20th century and something entirely different, but As you will my Grace, But lets take it a step even further.
I thought about writing poems about writing poems about writing poetry,
But then again that seemed a bit foolish to me
For shortly there after a messenger of GOD came and pronounced it shit
So I said fuck it and Quit
I thought about writing poems about writing poems about writing poetry,
But then again that seemed a bit foolish to me
For shortly there after a messenger of GOD came and pronounced it shit
So I said fuck it and Quit
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Jul 2003, 1:07 AM
I apologise, I'm sorry, I'm really really drunk and I have 8 people at my house naked(Only two of them female sadly enough). I have no clue what that has to do with anything other than me being naked drunk and sorry. Can you forgive me?
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Jul 2003, 1:05 AM
True that, True that, I'm sorry, I've just been incredibly drunk these past few days. Well drunk or stoned but either way, I'm sorry. My bad, Party Fowl on me.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Jul 2003, 12:47 AM
So was I. I think I'm pretty good at rewrites.
Local Band, Very Kickass.
Local Band, Very Kickass.
replying on Fucking A!?!? by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Jul 2003, 12:46 AM
Well duh?
replying on Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602
20 Jul 2003, 12:45 AM
Okay I was refering to the poem, not to me. Make it apparent in your writing not in commentary. Side comments mean nothing as a poet, its the body of the poem that matters.
replying on Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8
19 Jul 2003, 4:50 PM
Really, I've been looking for a new mouthwash, and I get to break my windows!! What a bonus!!
on Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8
19 Jul 2003, 3:39 PM
LMMFAO!!!
I was only hoping for a Comment on the poem, not a whole poem! Props. JB, You made my day. -10-
I was only hoping for a Comment on the poem, not a whole poem! Props. JB, You made my day. -10-
on Death Wish by Kitch
19 Jul 2003, 2:59 PM
Wow.. You do suck. I mean even at sucking. This is merely Mediocore. Not good, not bad. Just there.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 2:54 PM
Oh I realise that you don't feel I'm among the top ten poets here. Thats my opinion not yours(As you'd say blowing smoke up my own ass). Still I'm more poetic than you'll ever give me credit for being. Just a statement. Not meant to be offensive, just stated.
on Tears and Tombstones by OnTheOtherHand
19 Jul 2003, 2:50 PM
Excellent writing. -10-
on Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602
19 Jul 2003, 2:46 PM
Touching, but more details please. Why is this Joe So important to you, Who the hell is he? That type of stuff.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 2:29 PM
Only if its breaded first, and you bring the special brownies for dessert.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 2:03 PM
Maybe its...
Cuz, I can't seem to wake up
Stuck in a state of dazzling daydreams
Could be I'm so fucked up
From all the bud I've been blazing
Or the lack there of
Stuck in my lungs
I don't think your in the same state of mind
But yeah our locations aren't far apart
By the way, Have you ever heard of a band called the Random Heros?
Cuz, I can't seem to wake up
Stuck in a state of dazzling daydreams
Could be I'm so fucked up
From all the bud I've been blazing
Or the lack there of
Stuck in my lungs
I don't think your in the same state of mind
But yeah our locations aren't far apart
By the way, Have you ever heard of a band called the Random Heros?
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 1:57 PM
I'm currently needing a detox, Right now my mind is so blurred that thoughts and Ideas make no sense to me, and I'm feeling paranoid. Paranoiya and my writing are not really good friends.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 1:51 PM
This coming from the False Apollo? I'm still more poetic than you'll ever give me credit for.