replying on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jul 2003, 2:59 AM
Well thats what it should have been, but apparently not.
on thought & memory by Bill Z Bub
14 Jul 2003, 4:24 PM
This tickles the little hampster running on a wheel in my brain's nut sack. -10-
replying on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend
14 Jul 2003, 4:16 PM
Here is my rewrite
When I was born,
a child only dreamed of,
mearly a lust that couldn't be filled,
that dream was forgotten when I was brought into this world
I was loved before and even more after I was born, Again
When I was born,
a child only dreamed of,
mearly a lust that couldn't be filled,
that dream was forgotten when I was brought into this world
I was loved before and even more after I was born, Again
on Wanksta by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
14 Jul 2003, 9:30 AM
Drab. Very Drab.
on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend
14 Jul 2003, 9:27 AM
Vague poem, I like the second line alot. -8-
replying on TBPOD Speaks by King Abdullah II
13 Jul 2003, 1:22 PM
Hahahaha, Make your own guesses, As for me I have no doubt what-so-ever who this is. If I didn't already worship them secretly in my closet(Which has been converted into a shine to this noble noble being), I would build one. In cause you can't tell He has taken one of my xanga entires and rewritten it to be Funnier than a Gay Man locked in a sexual paradise for the straight.
on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:36 AM
I think pissing you off was his point. He lives for it. Good Vilanelle by the way. -9-
on Broken by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:30 AM
Touching, but lacks enough expression of rage and anger to go with all the broken things. -8-
P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
on On A Night Like This by bazz
10 Jul 2003, 6:27 PM
Have you ever heard of banal me lad? Look it up cause this is a great example.
replying on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr
10 Jul 2003, 12:26 PM
Its not Movie material, but I like it.
replying on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr
10 Jul 2003, 12:24 PM
Thanks
on Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 11:50 AM
You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-
replying on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2003, 11:36 AM
Hey I mearly called you a cyborg regaining humanity, which you do have to admit, with your writing style and your DMTR thingy, You are a machine. Please Disect and reassemble my username next?
on Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II
8 Jul 2003, 1:29 PM
Poor you.. I pity your pain, for being mistaken as one of the best poets, on the ranker. How sad.
on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 1:21 PM
Wow. I'm impressed by the author's note. Well done, and very informative. You deserve a Maturity Harness... Oh Yeah we don't have any of those. Well here since I couldn't offer one of those, have a D.A. style ten. -=1_0=-. ;)
on SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM
Whats sad is I'm amused by this.
replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Jul 2003, 12:46 PM
Yeah, but hey! Its legal in canada(at least thats what I heard anyway.) If only the Bush would do something useful and make it legal... Til then its Tokin in the basement, for me.
replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Jul 2003, 12:42 PM
Awe... Your such a sweetie pie.
replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Jul 2003, 12:39 PM
It was more for Horus8's(or any other serious poet's) reaction of WTF. I know its not a Haiku, But I'm not ready to add to it yet, but Don't worry I will(Eventually).