replying on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Feb 2005, 1:36 AM
Special, yeah.
That what my mommy says any way yepper roni
I'm mommy's special boy uh huh I am.
That what my mommy says any way yepper roni
I'm mommy's special boy uh huh I am.
replying on Yes, D.A. Private Eye Guy by Luzr
13 Feb 2005, 11:31 AM
What do you expect, I was just a little drunk, by little a mean alot, when I wrote this.
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on Orion takes aim by oneglove
13 Feb 2005, 11:11 AM
Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
replying on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Feb 2005, 2:01 PM
Rhyming it would steal from it content, and as you said, its all about the subtle highlights. The first line is just that. A hook.
The golden heels. A lot is ment by that.
A) Head/heels, a play on the classic head over heels.
B) Heads become heels and his heels become gold. Two key words. Head, Gold. (He is a blond)
C) Gold is something that is coveted. James is coveted.
D) Lets not reveal all the mystery shall we?
Later Daze
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The golden heels. A lot is ment by that.
A) Head/heels, a play on the classic head over heels.
B) Heads become heels and his heels become gold. Two key words. Head, Gold. (He is a blond)
C) Gold is something that is coveted. James is coveted.
D) Lets not reveal all the mystery shall we?
Later Daze
<3 Jason
on Psalm of Wonder by Dovina
31 Jan 2005, 12:17 PM
I disagree. It does work on an emotional level.
replying on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom
26 Jan 2005, 5:52 PM
Actually The Male Character does it. Its part of the short coming to livejournal near you soon.
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<3 Jason
replying on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom
26 Jan 2005, 2:30 PM
One extra? and yes 6 roses, they were dipped in wax, pink my favorite color and ment to be a suprize that ended up in the trash.
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<3 Jason
replying on The Difference by thepinkbunnyofdoom
26 Jan 2005, 2:24 PM
Jesu loves you my son? lol. yea, a bit preachy, but sometimes thats how the best conversations are.
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on Conjugate the verb by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
21 Jan 2005, 11:23 PM
Hows can you even consider this to be free verse. More like "other", or perhaps, Caged Verse. Either way, I thought it was crap. But eh? What do I know.
on In The Beginning by Dovina
16 Jan 2005, 1:38 AM
LOL
on Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57
10 Jan 2005, 6:27 PM
Wow, looks like you got hit by the harsher side of the ranker.
on The Wall is Crying by daggatolar
10 Jan 2005, 10:44 AM
Harsh on the thought required to so much as understand what the fuck your talking about. No Offense. Thought it was bad ass as far as Imagines, but I draw no real meaning out of this. -8- for now.
on The Poet's Plight by dougsoderstrom
10 Jan 2005, 10:32 AM
First verse, loved/magical things were expected, and then second and third were like I got shit on while pondering the beautiful imagine lain before.
on Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17
9 Jan 2005, 4:20 PM
Damn, what I wouldn't give for a drunken down on his luck suicidal wino right now, a crayon, and some extra copies of this this to draw on the back of in case he has a couple of buddies :0
In other words, very moving
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In other words, very moving
<3 Jason
on Existential questions by kawakurdi
9 Jan 2005, 4:10 PM
Forced rhyme helps drive it well.
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<3 Jason
on War Story by dougsoderstrom
8 Jan 2005, 7:05 PM
"Moslem, becoming," just few typos, lots of forest gump rip offs, and a couple of rereads where spacing and metaphors, and spell check come into play
on War Story by dougsoderstrom
8 Jan 2005, 6:55 PM
Have you ever heard of the difference between a letter and a poem?
replying on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Jan 2005, 6:43 PM
yes, I know typos.
on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Jan 2005, 6:42 PM
Now thats original. No mistaking that for some one else's qoute, what so ever. Seriously nice parity.
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<3 Jason
<3 Jason