on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub
5 Jul 2003, 6:36 PM
where'd it go, bill?
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 1:54 PM
*BLAM*
on some deleted poem
9 Jun 2003, 6:43 AM
hey pink bunbun,
this is decent. but to improve it you need to make it consistent. either get your meter and rhyme working throughout the whole thing, or drop it entirely and make your point without it. to mix the two makes it fall flat.
this is decent. but to improve it you need to make it consistent. either get your meter and rhyme working throughout the whole thing, or drop it entirely and make your point without it. to mix the two makes it fall flat.
on Christ Kebab by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
8 Jun 2003, 5:30 PM
can i get a side of holy ghost with that?
on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Jun 2003, 5:13 PM
Hmm. this sounds a lot like LIBEL. or maybe even SLANDER.
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2003, 6:08 PM
ouch. that smarts. ooh.stop it. no. don't. stop.
hahahaha.
the fact that you bother to try tells me that you are not over your little obsession. why not update the sexx chart?
xo,
<~>
hahahaha.
the fact that you bother to try tells me that you are not over your little obsession. why not update the sexx chart?
xo,
<~>
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 2:10 PM
vipersna,
the poemranker community would appreciate it if you wished your mother well from us. we are so sorry to see her go. we feel like she never even gave us a chance. and we are really, really glad that she's not a doctor or someone who deals with critical issues, since her 'research' is swiss cheese. perhaps if she had taken the time to get to know us, she would have come to love us. but i doubt it. she deserved her wank.
it had been suggested to me that you should receive one as well. ironically, you have shown yourself to be more of an adult than your mom. i'm sure she taught you, as a child, to look both ways before crossing the street. why did she not live by her own advice?
we are not nice here. this is poemRANKER, not poemNICER. there are plenty of aol sites for the sort of audience she is looking for. when she can take criticism, and, more importantly, when she learns a little more about group dynamics, we hope that her 'journey' finds her back here at the ranker. but for now, the kitchen is empty, and everybody else is in the backyard at the party. join us for some fava beans and a nice chianti?
the poemranker community would appreciate it if you wished your mother well from us. we are so sorry to see her go. we feel like she never even gave us a chance. and we are really, really glad that she's not a doctor or someone who deals with critical issues, since her 'research' is swiss cheese. perhaps if she had taken the time to get to know us, she would have come to love us. but i doubt it. she deserved her wank.
it had been suggested to me that you should receive one as well. ironically, you have shown yourself to be more of an adult than your mom. i'm sure she taught you, as a child, to look both ways before crossing the street. why did she not live by her own advice?
we are not nice here. this is poemRANKER, not poemNICER. there are plenty of aol sites for the sort of audience she is looking for. when she can take criticism, and, more importantly, when she learns a little more about group dynamics, we hope that her 'journey' finds her back here at the ranker. but for now, the kitchen is empty, and everybody else is in the backyard at the party. join us for some fava beans and a nice chianti?
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 1:21 PM
whose girlfriend is ugly? jeremi's? or kaolin's fiance? correct me if i am wrong, but i do not believe that -=Dark_Angel=- has ever mentioned his sexual preference, never mind posted a photo of a partner. hell, he's never even confirmed his own gender. how do you know, journey, how do you know?
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 6:39 PM
Re: a comment on Fucked up? by Vipersna Vipersna 02-Jun-03, 06:23 PM
This harness is mine. da just can't accept the fact I can write better than him even if it's my worst peice!
Re: a comment on Fucked up? by Vipersna <~> 02-Jun-03, 06:37 PM
oh, dear, it's that scalliwag da, again. mucking things up for -=Dark_Angel=- someone really out to do something about it. maybe picasso could paint his portrait? oh, right. he's dead. has anyone seen THE NEXT PICASSO on the loose?
This harness is mine. da just can't accept the fact I can write better than him even if it's my worst peice!
Re: a comment on Fucked up? by Vipersna <~> 02-Jun-03, 06:37 PM
oh, dear, it's that scalliwag da, again. mucking things up for -=Dark_Angel=- someone really out to do something about it. maybe picasso could paint his portrait? oh, right. he's dead. has anyone seen THE NEXT PICASSO on the loose?
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 1:51 PM
commendable, this [commentable] version.
huzzah!
huzzah!
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 1:55 PM
shelton, ct
home of the wiffle ball.
home of the wiffle ball.
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 2:15 PM
now wait. i'm confused.
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 2:45 PM
that sounds a little meatier than a slap, mr. slapmeonthepatio. sounds more like a slammeonthepatio, or a reammeonthepatio, or even an analrapemeonthepatio
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 2:47 PM
will you beat the head of my cock with the head or your cock? or do i need to break your teeth,just in case you get frisky?
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2003, 2:48 PM
yes! testify.
on Final Comment by dougsoderstrom
27 May 2003, 8:10 AM
professor soderstrom,
what makes you a friend to all? many here have not treated you as one. in fact, they have treated you as an enemy. so, why?
what makes you a friend to all? many here have not treated you as one. in fact, they have treated you as an enemy. so, why?
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 8:15 AM
you scared zzinia away you naughty boy.
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 8:24 PM
but , surely, not without thine hand!!!
well, there's something about the sky swallowing you whole which betrays the pain you fight through. being swallowed, submitting,--you see what i mean? i feel like you are forged by will, and then you're bait on a hook at the end.
this is strong writing. but i want a stronger end.
(am i ever satisfied?)
this is strong writing. but i want a stronger end.
(am i ever satisfied?)