on The Drunkest ever by horus8
9 Jul 2003, 10:03 PM
is everyone OFF for the summer???
on Fireworks & Family Reunions (Randel's cry for love) by Shardik
5 Jul 2003, 7:20 PM
funny. happy 4th.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 7:17 PM
the first 4 lines are great, though. do something more with that.
on Border towns & the runs by horus8
16 Jul 2003, 7:55 PM
bueno.
on rainday by Bill Z Bub
16 Jul 2003, 8:43 PM
galumphingly good.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2003, 10:07 AM
go get 'em, chiquita.
on S c r e a m by Kitch
15 Jul 2003, 8:40 PM
i know exactly what you need. take it waaay back, and treat yourself to a little "pretty hate machine" , extra loud! you'll thank me in the morning!!1
on rainday by Bill Z Bub
15 Jul 2003, 8:41 PM
i want more bounce in this nonsensey-like rhymer!
(oh, i am such a whiner!)
good star, but take it all the way, BZB.
(oh, i am such a whiner!)
good star, but take it all the way, BZB.
on Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer
15 Jul 2003, 9:07 PM
profane...
did you want 'chords', to give it more blood?
maybe "laid" instead of "lain"
good work, here, but not user-friendly. then again, does it need to be?
did you want 'chords', to give it more blood?
maybe "laid" instead of "lain"
good work, here, but not user-friendly. then again, does it need to be?
on thought & memory by Bill Z Bub
14 Jul 2003, 9:40 PM
BILL!! do not tickle these deities!! the are violent, and virulent.
drop the great; embrace the mundane. you will love me for it.
x, z
drop the great; embrace the mundane. you will love me for it.
x, z
on On A Night Like This by bazz
14 Jul 2003, 9:48 PM
this is the ttle of a bob dylan song.
what do youwant from us, when you give less than we expect? the naming is everything.
what do youwant from us, when you give less than we expect? the naming is everything.
on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
9 Jul 2003, 10:18 PM
all gone. new clothes. new shoes. Leo, do you still need me?
on Butterfield, Minn. Tommy's farm 1993 by Bachus
9 Jul 2003, 10:29 PM
sshhhh...
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 7:06 PM
amen. absolutely beautiful. welcome back.
on Death on my arm by INTRANSIT
5 Jul 2003, 6:37 PM
hey rich. i'm back. and safe.
and you are more minimslist than when i left...
and you are more minimslist than when i left...
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 4:36 PM
drink more. masturbate less. that is all.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 7:16 PM
you can't just say leaden like that and have it mean only one thing! what about x-ray? and alchemy?
damn it, man! are you getting lazy!!!????
damn it, man! are you getting lazy!!!????