poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (461-480)

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on Tupperware-Caskets by <{Baba^Yaga}> 27 Mar 2003, 7:22 PM
find something i can have with a long flat red, and we're talking, poncho.
on Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8 26 Mar 2003, 10:52 AM
maybe not atomic any more. maybe darwinian. have a 9 on me.
on if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems 26 Mar 2003, 8:50 AM
pimm pull
on sic homina ad papyrum by bondjedi 3 Apr 2003, 7:40 AM
oh my, this made me chuckle.

thanks for a laugh.
on some deleted poem 2 Apr 2003, 8:07 AM
mrs g,

spanish is not a language i can claim any understanding of, so please forgive me for running this through an online translator. what i couls make out, i liked very much. my heart aches for you.

z
on Unlocking Happiness by darkhelmet10 31 Mar 2003, 11:40 AM
damn. i read the title fast, and i thought it said, "unCOCKing happiness". it's that damn kthulah, and her prettycock poem, getting me mind on one track. sigh.
on some deleted poem 31 Mar 2003, 11:42 AM
oh, my. this warmed me through and through. can i borrow, when you've done with him?
on The dance as old as time by wEdible Underpantsw 28 Mar 2003, 6:34 AM
so bad it's good.

http://www.likesbooks.com/parody.html
on some deleted poem 28 Mar 2003, 6:41 AM
what about 'pawned' for a title?

i really like this, especially "It's just like you to know the name and the price of the Best One of
Anything." i don't get the slumbering hills reference, though. would i understand it if i saw them?
on Theory Of Anything by Blue Magpie 28 Mar 2003, 7:50 AM
why do i have a problem with the wind carving snowflakes? it irritates me. i am such a realist. why can't i warp my mind around a logical twist? ugh.

anyway, i like it. but i think the strongest part is
"The important thing
is to cut the right wire
when defusing the time-bomb".

but then, i also think that that's a separate poem. the ideas aren't melded enough for me, in this poem's current state. hope that helps.
on WhyI laugh with Moses. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 27 Mar 2003, 7:23 PM
you are so cute when you are stoned, you know that???
on Meditation 03 by Blue Magpie 28 Mar 2003, 7:52 AM
you know, you can rhyme more than one syllable at a time; you can cross and slaqnt rhyme; you can get all kinds of complex patterns working, or you can thump away on the bass drum, like you did here. it might make the verse less clunky if you expanded your technique.
on Ode to a cock muncher by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 28 Mar 2003, 7:57 AM
hey, you deleted my comments. no fair.
on some deleted poem 26 Mar 2003, 10:56 AM
hey, i know this guy. i never got in the car--or anything else--with him, though.

well done, mrs.g.
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 26 Mar 2003, 8:30 AM
but will you come to connecticut?
on Disappear by sk8boardandpoems 26 Mar 2003, 8:36 AM
you really should of known.
hahahaha!!!!!!!!
white sheet.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
on some deleted poem 24 Mar 2003, 12:33 PM
3 things:
pathway--singular--unless you have more than one rectum?
(did they tear you a new one, laddie?)

also, S1, tentative.

i had no idea you were so...sensitive. kiss kiss. i'll bring my strap on, then, shall i?
on By the way... by sk8boardandpoems 26 Mar 2003, 8:38 AM
shit.
on riddle by ~incarnate~ 26 Mar 2003, 12:47 PM
one more hint, please
on The grand embeddiment by horus8 26 Mar 2003, 12:37 PM
fig leaf pornography?
what!

why are they callled devil docs anyway? somehow i missed that.