on The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw
21 Mar 2003, 11:47 AM
on some deleted poem
20 Mar 2003, 7:16 AM
collosumnal! ye shall be released, angry jean.
on Shut Up by openwounds
23 Mar 2003, 5:22 PM
fingers are next, right? so no more typing in of poems???
on Fleeting Fantasy by Sawa
23 Mar 2003, 8:03 PM
well, what a nice little can of worms you have here.
it's bitter withour being brutal; it uses a cliche here and there, but upends them.
but, somehow, i wanted you to act. you're still a victim, in this piece. stab, or walk, or something!
returning is no panacea: the poem, it dies.
it's bitter withour being brutal; it uses a cliche here and there, but upends them.
but, somehow, i wanted you to act. you're still a victim, in this piece. stab, or walk, or something!
returning is no panacea: the poem, it dies.
on some deleted poem
23 Mar 2003, 8:03 PM
cheery thought. what are you doing to make it any different?
on Eternal Waiting by darkhelmet10
23 Mar 2003, 4:10 PM
you could put on more eyeliner.
and add a few more piercings.
and add a few more piercings.
on Controlling Desire by maffy
23 Mar 2003, 4:53 PM
so, you're in love with a necrophiliac medical examiner???? ew.!!!!
luv2write, please check out codependents anonymous. 12 steps never worked for me, but, what the hell, most people seem to get off on being addicted to something. and 'those rooms' are full of people who will listen with open ears as you spilll this sort of thing. honestly, where is your sense of self? do you really think like this?
oh, wait, i get it, it's a satire, and you're making fun of 12 steppers!!! in that case, schwing!!!!
oh, wait, i get it, it's a satire, and you're making fun of 12 steppers!!! in that case, schwing!!!!
on Lost by LeBlank II
21 Mar 2003, 11:55 AM
read it here:
http://www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm
http://www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm
on The System by LeBlank II
21 Mar 2003, 11:57 AM
www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm
on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw
21 Mar 2003, 12:01 PM
on some deleted poem
20 Mar 2003, 8:36 PM
oh, my. whatever could be wrong with that!!!
on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT
20 Mar 2003, 7:18 AM
fine. you see, when it is harder, it is easier.
you are better for the exercise, and this is quite a lovely little villanelle, goodly sir! bravo!
you are better for the exercise, and this is quite a lovely little villanelle, goodly sir! bravo!
on some deleted poem
20 Mar 2003, 8:38 PM
DID YOU USE BULBOUS ROOT VEGETABLES????!!!!????
on Kooo Kooo DirectOr by wLeBlancw
21 Mar 2003, 12:03 PM
on As I went riding with Jeeves by bondjedi
23 Mar 2003, 8:23 PM
you know exactly what they mean!!!!
you're an athlete, not a survivor!