poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (141-160) and replies

Comments by<~>, 141–160 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Toku by Bill Z Bub 21 Oct 2003, 4:56 PM
http://www.geocities.com/mossfarmpotluck/toku
replying on water falls by Bill Z Bub 21 Oct 2003, 2:23 AM
bub?
on Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise 15 Oct 2003, 10:45 AM
one who?
on Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise 15 Oct 2003, 10:44 AM
not to be televised, live.
on Pet Hatreds by Bobjim 15 Oct 2003, 10:43 AM
how wonderfully ironic!
on Facing Goodbye by Caducus 15 Oct 2003, 9:25 AM
CAD,
nice start.
this is a lovely tribute, but in terms off its poetics, it could use a revamp. the last stanza is definitely the weakest.

good to see you writing again.
on For M. B. by Tits 15 Oct 2003, 8:37 AM
never figured you for a deleter.

ah, me.
replying on 195.157.153.253 by <~> 14 Oct 2003, 6:22 AM
for the longest time, i thought you were settle. i was fooled!
replying on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 5:06 PM
any chaance, oh ambiguously gendered traveller, of posting what you've come up with, for those of us who've been blacklisted by gwb by registering at ajeeb, only to find out that we need $30 to get the answer?

i am an ignorant american, and my language skills are poor.
on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 12:18 PM
"لجهاد الإسلامي في بل"????

no way!!!
on Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 12:17 PM
indeed. what inspired said muck?
replying on Why? by MercedezDream 13 Oct 2003, 12:09 PM
same to you!
on For W. by A. Nomaly 12 Oct 2003, 7:31 PM
line breaks--why? no werkie, comme ca.
on Billy and the voices by SupremeDreamer 12 Oct 2003, 7:22 PM
i think that coming right out with cognizance of your disorder ruins the surprise, lee.

it's quite entertaining, the 'or so they say' refrain. but the opening needs work. imo.
replying on Reptilian by Christof 10 Oct 2003, 10:58 AM
what about "brownitude"?
i've always fancied that variant.
replying on A History of Truth by Blue Magpie 9 Oct 2003, 12:39 PM
Dear Blue Magpie,

I apaolgize for my mistaken accusation. I was wrong about the misspellings. I have been a horrible mood today, and you bore the brunt of it.

I stand corrected.
on Reptilian by Christof 9 Oct 2003, 11:34 AM
and that's when the kundalini kicks in, isn't it?
you bastard snake.
replying on Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet 9 Oct 2003, 9:01 AM
for me, it reads like a blow to the head with a wet text-book. and believe me, i know PLENTY about that!!!
replying on Spider Spider (A Parody in Form) by Blue Magpie 9 Oct 2003, 8:01 AM
more like the mucus, less like the d.,dsdj???js.
on A History of Truth by Blue Magpie 9 Oct 2003, 7:17 AM
you have some desperate misspelling here, my friend. the one that stands out most glaringly is "the Pilot". at first, i thought you were writing a parody. but then i realized that you were referring to Pontius Pilate.

there are some good ideas in here, but your long-winded discourse loses steam before it gets barely started.