on Take Four by NanceXToo
19 Apr 2004, 4:11 PM
nice acrobatics, sound-wise.
on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined
3 Dec 2003, 12:40 PM
and they'll have fun fun fun 'til her daddy burns her honda away....
on null by Bill Z Bub
19 Nov 2003, 11:32 AM
what did you delete?
replying on Mi Casa es Su Casa by <~>
19 Nov 2003, 8:54 AM
read, baby. Read. it's the answer to both.
on hall panful by skaskowski
19 Nov 2003, 8:49 AM
half great, all fun
on The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa
19 Nov 2003, 8:45 AM
sums it up, all right.
on Shouting at dogs by Bobjim
10 Nov 2003, 7:07 PM
you amuse me again, bobjim. thankee.
on Naylor's Handbag by Bobjim
7 Nov 2003, 6:18 PM
bravo, sir.
replying on EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet
28 Oct 2003, 4:29 PM
you're parody is made not credible by the sheer lack of cerical errors.
on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim
28 Oct 2003, 8:29 AM
i enjoyed this more than anything i have read here in months. thank you.
only one line interfered with my pleasure:
"That it's them sing (not me),"
i thing should be reanimated to:
It's them that sing, (not me),
only one line interfered with my pleasure:
"That it's them sing (not me),"
i thing should be reanimated to:
It's them that sing, (not me),
on My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit
24 Oct 2003, 6:51 PM
Behave yourself, Senor Burro!!!!!!!
replying on Mr. America (Hunting Season) by SupremeDreamer
22 Oct 2003, 2:30 PM
okay, so if hunting was not you base metaphor, what is?
help a stupid blonde out, wouldja?
help a stupid blonde out, wouldja?
replying on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian
22 Oct 2003, 11:37 AM
what about the varnish? talk about the pines that gave it, and how patient they were to give their blood for the sharpened D of eternity.
maybe you drink a chocolate colored guiness (or 2) while you wait for the chocolate varnish to dry.
the last quatrain--just scrap it, and go from there.
why do we run out of steam like that, i wonder?
maybe you drink a chocolate colored guiness (or 2) while you wait for the chocolate varnish to dry.
the last quatrain--just scrap it, and go from there.
why do we run out of steam like that, i wonder?
replying on Toku by Bill Z Bub
22 Oct 2003, 12:41 AM
i was not disagreeing with you about your critique of the poem.
i was merely noting that you were cranky tonight,.
i was merely noting that you were cranky tonight,.
replying on Toku by Bill Z Bub
22 Oct 2003, 12:40 AM
remind me not to type when i am falling asleep, next time.
replying on Toku by Bill Z Bub
21 Oct 2003, 7:40 PM
even out here in the sticks, we know about john bly and his 'masterpiece'. i did not HAVE to post that page. i agree with you that the poem needs a little more framing. but i believe it captures the joy the guy was feeling. i was not arguing taht point; i was merely observing that you are, once again, cranky. you may not feel cranky, but it comes across that way in print. cranker. that point stands.
replying on Toku by Bill Z Bub
21 Oct 2003, 7:28 PM
jeez you are cranky tonight. are you sure you're not holed up in a john?????
leave hatters hare alone--she has bushels of green tomatos and her pig farts when she gets into them! the things she has to contend with!!
leave hatters hare alone--she has bushels of green tomatos and her pig farts when she gets into them! the things she has to contend with!!