poemranker ::20 most recent comments by pete and replies

Comments bypete, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on for John by pete 20 Jul 2021, 1:03 PM
Thanks Jill
replying on for John by pete 20 Jul 2021, 1:02 PM
hi yes ; all my stuff(most) works better when performed. Thanks for your thoughts
replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 28 Oct 2007, 4:03 AM
oh, you must mean vietnam... youre in cyberspace here, not amerika ... and a lot of people here have too painfully different a view ... this is military triumphalism masquerading as soulfulness ... shame on you and your nation
on Soccer by x0lovelylarnx0 19 Oct 2007, 2:16 PM
ahh ... yes; getting there (ps don't mind me ... i was crap at your age too)
on Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0 19 Oct 2007, 2:14 PM
i'm sorry but your stuff is really dreadful ....
on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 19 Oct 2007, 2:13 PM
do you know, or do you want to know, what they are doing?
on Life Is Like A Rose by x0lovelylarnx0 19 Oct 2007, 2:09 PM
god? ... god!
on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0 19 Oct 2007, 2:08 PM
ugh
on Henry's breeches by Stephen Robins 19 Oct 2007, 2:02 PM
poor love, give him a cosolation point
on Her name was Marjorie Harper by Caducus 19 Oct 2007, 1:59 PM
she died a poem
and were you god
ten would be the score

replying on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0 18 Oct 2007, 6:38 PM
excuse me, but you are here for criticism are you not? ... or just to show off ... in poetry often a lot more can be said by fewer words ... don't get so touchy
on A double haiku about President Putin by Engelbert Humpalot 18 Oct 2007, 8:01 AM
cute
on Owl Eyes by MacFrantic 18 Oct 2007, 8:00 AM
dunno why but i like this ... poetry,though... not so sure
on The Devil and I by forsaken 18 Oct 2007, 7:59 AM
re-write once the devil has gone and note the difference
on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0 18 Oct 2007, 7:56 AM
too many words
on Holding You by forsaken 18 Oct 2007, 7:54 AM
shows promise
on inside the raven by PsydewaysTears 18 Oct 2007, 7:53 AM
don't he though
on RAGTIME by xyz 18 Oct 2007, 7:52 AM
grow up
on This Song by MacFrantic 18 Oct 2007, 7:51 AM
cop-out saying it's for someone else .... good story tho
on Alice to Slumber by Skamper 18 Oct 2007, 7:48 AM
scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius