on Fire (a haiku series) by eviltwin
11 Aug 2002, 7:06 PM
I like the progression. I think historically haiku were supposed to be twinned with renga's to do something like this. (or something like that -- what do I know? :) I do like this.
on ghost of one by crin
11 Aug 2002, 7:08 PM
one is always dying unless they're dead.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 12:54 PM
eh.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 2:21 AM
I'm really having trouble putting the images together. got the first one. got the second. don't get the third tying in, really. maybe if I knew the latin? record makes death? hmm. now I'm curious enough to look it up. :) recollection workman death. something like. hmm. ooh -- the workman died but comes back to life to turn off the lathe? sorry, really too obscure for me.
on Pi by feelinglistless
10 Aug 2002, 12:32 PM
hm.. I want a little more out of this story (story; I don't see any poem about this other than the linebreaks every couple of words).
on Untitled 2 by nightii
12 Aug 2002, 8:31 PM
very well put; sure, it's the same old same old, but I don't think I've seen it so concisely formed.
on Sophisticant by Bluesee
11 Aug 2002, 7:10 PM
The words really feel like they were pounded to fit the rhmye and meter you wanted; very awkward to read.
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 7:04 PM
the one thing I don't get... where's your other 'e' in poem? I thought that was a trademark thing...
I really don't know how to vote on this piece. It did what it was intending to do very well. And for that it gets high marks. But I can't say I like what it was trying to do (which is the whole point). So!? ... ? Eh. 9. It's brilliant in context. :)
I really don't know how to vote on this piece. It did what it was intending to do very well. And for that it gets high marks. But I can't say I like what it was trying to do (which is the whole point). So!? ... ? Eh. 9. It's brilliant in context. :)
on kauri by itchiwitch
8 Aug 2002, 11:56 PM
Hmm. kauri sounds like it could be a tree. I don't know what else it would be, but from this it sounds very treelike. which makes the haiku essentially pointless. so I'll presume it's not a tree...? ... google search. nope, it's a tree. maybe I'm missing something else?
on The Seasons, Changes by Frass
8 Aug 2002, 11:57 PM
I think I like what you're trying to say, but I'm not sure exactly what it is (if anything). ... ... too confusing.
on Hands. by LucidRevelation
9 Aug 2002, 12:06 AM
that's some intense child porn you've got there. fairly well written, but... is that really what you were going for?
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 5:25 PM
ooh, good call. I'll fix that. =) easy fix.
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Hey, something's broke: I edited a poem, eliminating all the current votes displayed, but on the 'your poems' page, it still shows the previously existing vote count and average. Erk.
responding to:
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Hey, something's broke: I edited a poem, eliminating all the current votes displayed, but on the 'your poems' page, it still shows the previously existing vote count and average. Erk.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 2:06 PM
Umm. I'm looking for a job...
this was the best place I could think of to show off "my mad 'l33t skillz".
this was the best place I could think of to show off "my mad 'l33t skillz".
on Quincy Eye by albellisimo
8 Aug 2002, 11:54 PM
whafu?
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 7:04 PM
eh.
on drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn
12 Aug 2002, 6:14 PM
interesting. I... almost like it. I might if I were in a different mood. It seems sloppily well done.
on good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit
12 Aug 2002, 8:30 PM
good surrealism.