on Fire (a haiku series) by eviltwin
11 Aug 2002, 7:06 PM
I like the progression. I think historically haiku were supposed to be twinned with renga's to do something like this. (or something like that -- what do I know? :) I do like this.
on ghost of one by crin
11 Aug 2002, 7:08 PM
one is always dying unless they're dead.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 2:21 AM
I'm really having trouble putting the images together. got the first one. got the second. don't get the third tying in, really. maybe if I knew the latin? record makes death? hmm. now I'm curious enough to look it up. :) recollection workman death. something like. hmm. ooh -- the workman died but comes back to life to turn off the lathe? sorry, really too obscure for me.
on Pi by feelinglistless
10 Aug 2002, 12:32 PM
hm.. I want a little more out of this story (story; I don't see any poem about this other than the linebreaks every couple of words).
on Untitled 2 by nightii
12 Aug 2002, 8:31 PM
very well put; sure, it's the same old same old, but I don't think I've seen it so concisely formed.
on Sophisticant by Bluesee
11 Aug 2002, 7:10 PM
The words really feel like they were pounded to fit the rhmye and meter you wanted; very awkward to read.
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 7:04 PM
the one thing I don't get... where's your other 'e' in poem? I thought that was a trademark thing...
I really don't know how to vote on this piece. It did what it was intending to do very well. And for that it gets high marks. But I can't say I like what it was trying to do (which is the whole point). So!? ... ? Eh. 9. It's brilliant in context. :)
I really don't know how to vote on this piece. It did what it was intending to do very well. And for that it gets high marks. But I can't say I like what it was trying to do (which is the whole point). So!? ... ? Eh. 9. It's brilliant in context. :)
on kauri by itchiwitch
8 Aug 2002, 11:56 PM
Hmm. kauri sounds like it could be a tree. I don't know what else it would be, but from this it sounds very treelike. which makes the haiku essentially pointless. so I'll presume it's not a tree...? ... google search. nope, it's a tree. maybe I'm missing something else?
on The Seasons, Changes by Frass
8 Aug 2002, 11:57 PM
I think I like what you're trying to say, but I'm not sure exactly what it is (if anything). ... ... too confusing.
on Hands. by LucidRevelation
9 Aug 2002, 12:06 AM
that's some intense child porn you've got there. fairly well written, but... is that really what you were going for?
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 5:25 PM
ooh, good call. I'll fix that. =) easy fix.
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Hey, something's broke: I edited a poem, eliminating all the current votes displayed, but on the 'your poems' page, it still shows the previously existing vote count and average. Erk.
responding to:
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Hey, something's broke: I edited a poem, eliminating all the current votes displayed, but on the 'your poems' page, it still shows the previously existing vote count and average. Erk.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 2:06 PM
Umm. I'm looking for a job...
this was the best place I could think of to show off "my mad 'l33t skillz".
this was the best place I could think of to show off "my mad 'l33t skillz".
on My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z
5 Aug 2002, 11:02 AM
re: DA. :rofl: You're right, Prince Arthas really is a dweeb. But I do like my death coil.
as for this poem... hmm. weird. sorry, can't say much else.
as for this poem... hmm. weird. sorry, can't say much else.
on Quincy Eye by albellisimo
8 Aug 2002, 11:54 PM
whafu?
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2002, 7:04 PM
eh.
on drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn
12 Aug 2002, 6:14 PM
interesting. I... almost like it. I might if I were in a different mood. It seems sloppily well done.
on good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit
12 Aug 2002, 8:30 PM
good surrealism.