on THE MASTER by ARTIE
30 Jan 2015, 1:23 PM
interesting idea, but I'm not feeling it.
on SUCH IS THE LOSS I FEEL by ARTIE
30 Jan 2015, 1:21 PM
This feels like you're writing from the heart, trying to find the words to make it more universal...but the effect for me is just that's it's more generic/bland.
The T'was feels affected, and [broken] stands out in an odd way as you're not playing with/using punctuation anywhere else....
The T'was feels affected, and [broken] stands out in an odd way as you're not playing with/using punctuation anywhere else....
on Sponds Hill, Cheshire, 26 December 2013 by Nicholas Jones
26 Jun 2014, 8:10 AM
Thirteen years? Poemranker's been here...yes, for thirteen years. Wow.
I love a lot of this. Don't have enough mind left to say whether I love all of it or not.
I love a lot of this. Don't have enough mind left to say whether I love all of it or not.
on wall flower by Freethinker1602
11 Mar 2013, 1:41 AM
Cute, in that it dances around the subject...but it does so so repetitiously! So repetitiously. As if it were repeating itself, verse after verse, saying the same thing. This needs to say something else, too, or instead. Try some specifics. Make us care about this character, in particular (or make the dance itself more interesting, but even then, it should be more personal).
on Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove
10 Mar 2013, 10:10 PM
nice finish, but the strokes up there were a bit unschooled—and if that was the point it's too meta for me. ;)
replying on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!
10 Mar 2013, 10:02 PM
Am I spoiled by facebook? I want to "like" this comment. *shudder*
replying on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!
10 Mar 2013, 9:58 PM
I'd call it satire of some middling order. On its own merits, it's middling; satire elevates it a touch, but only a touch...and rated within satire's bounds, it's still just middling at best.
Not to say I didn't enjoy bits of it, presuming satire. But still....
Not to say I didn't enjoy bits of it, presuming satire. But still....
replying on Max's Poems by nentwined
25 Sep 2012, 8:27 PM
Shameless. :)
Erm; erum. Perhaps? Perhaps, perhaps, per*klunk*.
Erm; erum. Perhaps? Perhaps, perhaps, per*klunk*.
replying on Max's Poems by nentwined
22 Jun 2012, 4:02 PM
Rockmage's—you can "search inside". Pictures of his art too, and I did a small handful of illustrations. :)
replying on Max's Poems by nentwined
22 Jun 2012, 3:58 PM
Yup :)
Don't really know "and all". I presume the dark angel contingent graduated. I fell out of phase, and then got more serious about poetry (and trying to get paid for it, which precluded posting anything to poemranker). And maybe it's just too bogged down, maybe the voting (ranking?) needs some other scale measure, ... probably things that are more recent should get precedence in terms of what get shown.
Got some free google advertising money today, tossing half of it at poemranker to see if anything happens.
Got some free google advertising money today, tossing half of it at poemranker to see if anything happens.
replying on Poemranker is Back! by Dovina
14 Sep 2011, 11:18 AM
hmm. it looks like that wasn't me. I hope that wasn't me. ah, the intricacies and confuse-ancies of poemranker... ;)
on Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp
14 Sep 2011, 10:47 AM
the rhyming! I'm blinded by the rhyming!
on David & Derrick by TheModestKing
6 Jun 2011, 6:52 PM
sad