poemranker ::20 most recent comments by nentwined (81-100) and replies

Comments bynentwined, 81–100 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on mission statement by malpaso 5 Mar 2009, 10:39 PM
two l's in ellipses.

the rest... eh. points for intent?
replying on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT 5 Mar 2009, 10:37 PM
kind of funny, kind of sad, I don't remember reading it before. But perhaps it's changed enough. :) I choose that.
on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT 5 Mar 2009, 10:35 PM
relieving?

interesting piece.
replying on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer 5 Mar 2009, 10:34 PM
favorited, even. :)
on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer 5 Mar 2009, 10:33 PM
Hear, hear!
on Snorting the Cosmic Dust. by DreamerSupreme 5 Mar 2009, 10:33 PM
my eyes blurred. you hit a constant tone that turned the words to mush (maybe I need more coffee).
on Back to reality by Prince of Void 5 Mar 2009, 10:31 PM
the edge of the ocean is just another's hell. or heaven we'd all get kicked out of. but it's nice to imagine?
on the invisible beauty by Prince of Void 5 Mar 2009, 10:30 PM
meh.
on diamond embedded once before & always by A. Nomaly 5 Mar 2009, 10:27 PM
strange... good flow, but the context isn't quite there for me.
on Unwind Again by dclark 5 Mar 2009, 10:26 PM
what? really? no.
on Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar 5 Mar 2009, 10:26 PM
insence -> incense

or rather, incense-like

hmm. better than I expected, from that; but still kind of plain. paint me more.
on The PROJECT by Sigh'ense... 5 Mar 2009, 10:24 PM
no.
on The death of Carlos Huarrez by Caducus 5 Mar 2009, 10:23 PM
huh. good stuff here. not quite picturing it all, (and what are "blue screams"?). But yeah, some good stuff here.
on The flute sound makes me blue by Prince of Void 5 Mar 2009, 10:21 PM
hmm, no.
on Echoes of Eichmann by Caducus 5 Mar 2009, 10:21 PM
has something, I like the weaving of images, and I think appropriate gravitas for the content. Just doesn't scan the way I want, and perhaps ... rough/disjoint in more than flow?
on Pill-Popper's Confessional by Sasha 5 Mar 2009, 10:18 PM
ROFL

Yes.

I think it needs a little smoothing, but yes, this is perfect ranker material.
on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry 5 Mar 2009, 10:16 PM
"soothe" your emotions, unless you truly mean sooth--which would mean to imply you're prognosticating, some. tracking biorhythms?

You've lost me with "diplome" though.

Doesn't quite hang together. But I appreciate what you're doing.

Shouldn't it be a pimple, though?
on for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub 5 Mar 2009, 10:15 PM
hmm.

hmm hmm hmm.

hmm.

and no, that's not supposed to mean any more than it says ;)
replying on prove me wrong by nentwined 5 Mar 2009, 10:12 PM
The thought came to me (well, "habits") while waiting for dinner to cook in the microwave. ;)

Trying to get into shape... latest attempt is lots of jump-roping. Amy mentioned that she used to enjoy it--as a kid; it's a thing kids enjoy, as a game, for fun... I started thinking about how much easier it is for kids to exercise (the whole cubed/squared thing, I think, of what muscles can support), and then started thinking on ... well, they're not doing it for the muscles, they're doing it to learn to do it (and teach their body to learn to do it, some, as well). ((well, they're doing it for fun, but that's not why it's "good"))

"fears" and "perfidy" largely came from trying to somewhat match the form that assembled itself into the first two stanzas--but they seem reasonable, overall. :)
replying on 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly 5 Mar 2009, 10:08 PM
Personal, shmersonal--come on, we'll rip it a new one ;)

But I like what you're doing. :)