replying on First, you gotta bend over.. by Bachus
22 Sep 2002, 4:34 PM
I'll check out some sleep and a meal. Do they rent those? :)
on First, you gotta bend over.. by Bachus
22 Sep 2002, 12:06 PM
actually, nothing was showing up in "recent" unless you edited the piece -- a side effect of my "plagiarism" patch. That has since been fixed.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
22 Sep 2002, 1:29 AM
yeehaw =)
replying on first words by decadentlaurel
21 Sep 2002, 11:32 AM
I wouldn't say *that* per se. :)
replying on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 1:26 PM
It's a fine line, in my opinion. I left others he did. Seriously, I recommend you read the original, and then change half of the last line and see if it looks like anything but a small penis pasted on in the bottom right corner of a large poster. "not greater than the sum of its parts"
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
20 Sep 2002, 1:11 PM
I have to admit you know your stuff. =)
replying on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 1:07 PM
It really is pretty well done in a "I'm going to be as difficult as possible with the least amount of effort" sort of way. really annoying. I'm going with Negativland's idea of "Fair Use" here, unless someone wants to break out lawyers. (http://www.negativland.com/fairuse.html
on On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 12:53 PM
This actually has (in my mind) significantly different meaning that the original. I don't approve given the context of what you've already copied and how you've copied it, but I think this is valid. [yeah, like you fucking care, right?]
on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 12:51 PM
I'm going to have to say that just changing "into the ocean" to "sucking cock" is not enough.
replying on first words by decadentlaurel
20 Sep 2002, 12:08 AM
I don't really feel the "poem" nature of it, I suppose -- there's nothing that breaks naturally into a cadence or rhythm. I think it makes excellent short fiction, though.
on first words by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 11:25 PM
a sad/sweet sentiment. I couldn't get into the reading of it, however.
on dps 2 - new ver. by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 11:24 PM
I've grown fond of version one; this one doesn't appeal to me so much.
on dps by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 11:23 PM
I don't understand how "i to look away again" fits in. I don't know what exactly you've changed, but my only stumbling block at the moment is "i to look away again"
on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
16 Sep 2002, 1:39 AM
I don't understand the "shape" of this poem. A slide? A method of distancing?
Ignoring the shape, I like the simplicity of statement. The rhythm is really strange, but it works.
Ignoring the shape, I like the simplicity of statement. The rhythm is really strange, but it works.
replying on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn
16 Sep 2002, 1:38 AM
and now I'm curious what it was called before you retitled it, with all this discussion...
If you say to me that you love I to me that it is not the truth. When you say to me that you hate I to me that you have found your heart. If you cry when you sing I to me that it is not the truth. If (ay olvideras) time me but no longer (ay) long time. We looked for the way to live by the day and if we were, it is in error. Everything that step, us (olvidera), and, I that it is not the truth.
I have no spanish. :)