i never really did care much for his poetry.

Its a her? ah.. well, you two seem to have gotten to know each other.

tues and sundays aye? what street you work on? :P

not insignifigant.. simply pale compared to understanding..

"was it the love"

love? cute.. now explain, or ofcourse: dont respond.. spare yourself exposing the fact that your brain is small.

Love of death? death is merciful, mortality? hrmm.. mortality.. nifty lil word to bring up along with death, your really making me think.. not.. god your fucking pathetic and boring.

Where the hell did you come from? eh? i have a sudden smart ass popping out of someones ass to make "witty" comments to in some way clown the poem or me..

back away, go back to your seat, and let someone who can do it right bash away at me.. like dark angel, eh? he puts some actual spice to it.. shit that counts.. your crappy lil burps are the product of a wanna-be.

"Or maybe tits"

thats cute, bring up tits.. do you fantasize about tits "hand"? do these fantasies cause your palms to sweat? does sweaty hands make you giddy and are you grateful to have lubrication to masturbate while thinking about "tits"? do you want me to ram your head into a rotting carcass?

;/ whats wrong with phantasmogoric? just wanted you to elaborate, if you dont mind.

It is prosey.. i have a problem writing in prosey fashion recently.. hrmm.. ill fix that soon enough. thanks.

yeah.. white is a good color.. snow.. cum.. blizzard blindness.. heh.. hey, hate to repeat questions, but what did crystal do that pissed you off? man i feel like a nosy bitch..

your creativity.. is really startling.. 4 comments mentioning 8th grade.. very little difference in any of it.. your a poet? im not convinced.

look.. "Hand".. would you mind jerking me off a lil? im a bit hard, and i dont think a retard like you would mind.. so, want to do a chap a favor? eh?

;/ ill make a note to edit that... (*scratches head* i didnt hear that anywhere.. fuck.. #$)(#*$)(#*$.. dont whine.. just fix it lee.. arg.)

whether i deserve the low marks, -shrug- i couldnt give a shit. settle, dark angel, and the holy choir can sing about my "shitty" writing for the rest of eternity and choke for all i care.

thanks for your comment and crit, always been usefull and constructive.

Preschool commentry. if your going to diss me, do it in a fashion that shows intelligence, or maybe some good humor would do it.. but either of these i dont feel your able to pull off, so dont bother trying.

... i write what comes via my calloused fingers.. ok.. end of rant.

i enjoyed writing it, im happy with it, damn everyone else to hell, and thanks for again saying im lazy.. end of whine.

thanks for continuing to push.. end of expressing gratitude

its not concise.. and it wasnt meant to describe hearing something.. tsk. keep the 10, im not flattered. Give me another zero. :P

Did you call abdulla over to make those witty comments and to provide those amusing votes? I mean, i know its all meant to piss me off, but i actually laughed. thanks for the free comedy act, i mean really.

-shrug- so you didnt like em. no loss. enjoy the rest of your day. :)

Couldnt you just be more, you know, not so uptight? jeez.

Laughing would have been better.. telling me im a little shit who cant write would be funny.. but:

"fuck you "dude".. well now cmon, that doesnt even cause me to feel any emotion what so ever.. i think your losing your touch..

you know, i really dont want you mentioning what you consider the breakfast of champions, it reveals why ive always been repulsed by your breath.. poop sticks arent that good for the olfactory senses of other people.. mouthwash isnt expensive, but perhaps you would like me to donate 10 dollars into the "save King Abdullahs breath foundation" ?

it would be a worthy investment i think anyway. :)

so?

Whoa? -shrug- just drugs man, just drugs, dont you know about them needles, joints, and lovely multi-colored pills? :P