| Re: Paintball's Flight by loneshadow29 |
4-Aug-03/5:07 AM |
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You make paintball seem so beautiful. I feel a lump in my throat.
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| Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones |
3-Aug-03/6:02 PM |
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| Re: Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig |
3-Aug-03/12:24 PM |
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I can't paint a picture with it.
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| Re: The Dark one's 2000th comment by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Aug-03/12:24 PM |
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An extra point for including an air bisquit.
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Aug-03/10:26 AM |
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This haiku made me hungry. Jelouse of the satisfied man on the beach.
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| Re: Momma, don't let your pipebombs grow up to be Jewish by Bachus |
19-Aug-03/8:55 AM |
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I am currently a Marine in Afghanistan. I came here with an attitude that I would eventually uderstand the people here better. I do understand them now. They are fatalistic and thick headed. None of them help one another or themselves. There is nothing but self pity in this country, and hatred for the rest of the world. I know that as soon as the UN forces leave this country the locals will put their women on leashes again, and all will be as it was again. I apologize for ranting. I enjoyed your uninhibited poem. (9)
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| Re: the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub |
18-Aug-03/9:54 AM |
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I like your imagery. I like how it appeals to several of the senses.
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| Re: null by Bill Z Bub |
18-Aug-03/9:59 AM |
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mmmmm...poon tang. A wonderful flowing description of the girl that is intermingled with the act itself. They are one and the same. Excellent, it read smoothly.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-03/11:55 AM |
Mmmm...Poke it with a stick wonderful. I'll have sweet dreams tonight. Dreams filled with pink balloons and smiling, drooling retards that clap and scream on very fast electric wheelchairs.
Thankyou.(10)
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| Re: Memory by Hostileintent |
15-Aug-03/12:12 PM |
I like this one
I hope you don't die
I hope you see the grinning monkey
That's hiding on your back
Tell him to fuck off
He's got the wrong guy
(8)
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| Re: Fuck Me Like Love Fucks Me (changed) by Son Of A Bitch |
15-Aug-03/12:29 PM |
Very good. It set off my turrets. I like the way it flows. I enjoyed every word. I can't stand poems that have lots of filler. People concentrate too much on an attractive presentation and end up putting too much pen to paper.
(10)
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| Re: LIVE FROM CHEYENNE,WY. "The Forgeters!" by horus8 |
6-Aug-03/9:56 AM |
Here is a forward from a book, Grass Sandals about
Basho
"Traditionally, poems in the form called haiku are
characterized by seventeen sylable broken into three
lines with five, seven, and five syllable
respectively. Each haiku includes language that
appeals to two of the five senses - sight, hearing,
smell, touch, and taste, or the additional sense of
movement."
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| Re: Fish by http://findingwater |
5-Aug-03/12:08 PM |
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My brand of wierd. Smell ya later.
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
5-Aug-03/12:01 PM |
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Idealy haiku should appeal to at least two of the five senses. It's something I don't do every time either.
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| Re: Dolly was a damn fine lamb by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
9-Aug-03/10:42 AM |
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3-Aug-03/6:01 PM |
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| Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig |
3-Aug-03/12:17 PM |
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| Re: Nigger Hole by horus8 |
6-Aug-03/10:18 AM |
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It set off my turettes...Thankyou.
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| Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones |
4-Aug-03/10:25 AM |
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Opinionated. How much do you know?
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| Re: ~Tildoe~ by Thom |
3-Aug-03/12:20 PM |
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I don't get it. It doesn't follow the rules either.
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