on Rearview mirrors by horus8
15 Aug 2003, 7:55 AM
thanks for the review
on In Memory of Princess Diana by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
23 Sep 2003, 7:37 AM
i like it. its clever.
10
10
on Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent
17 Aug 2003, 10:24 AM
please put a vote on the poem, bad or good, just vote.any comments are more than welcome
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2003, 10:27 AM
class!really nifty.9
take a gander at my one
take a gander at my one
on That Girl by Nicholas Monson
17 Aug 2003, 10:30 AM
the last half of the last line is kinda out of tune with the rest, but all round, i like it. 9
take a gander at my one 'confession of a troubled man' tell me what you think,in a vote or otherwise
take a gander at my one 'confession of a troubled man' tell me what you think,in a vote or otherwise
on Mi Casa es Su Casa by <~>
15 Aug 2003, 8:02 AM
aged:18
endgame:self expression through words
how far you're to go:general gist
endgame:self expression through words
how far you're to go:general gist
on how my life is dying by Hostileintent
9 Mar 2004, 4:59 AM
i'm miles from home,i'm pissed off. i'm hurting,i'm in a cafe,and i write.i write
on Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 4:49 AM
what was the point of that?
on Wanking In The Bucket by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 4:50 AM
you paint the scene well. but dont do it justice.
on Fun At The Gynaecologists by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 5:00 AM
once again edna. paint the picture perfectly (probably because you tell it like a short story), but go nowhere with it. i really have to agree with dvincent..its like a story, not a poem. is there a structure to any of your poetry??if their is, please tell me, because i would genuinely like to know.
and if you feel like telling me to get lost fine.. but fuck off from my writing too.
and if you feel like telling me to get lost fine.. but fuck off from my writing too.
on Toe Jam Poem by EDNA by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 5:05 AM
total crap
on Limp Cock by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 5:13 AM
its okay
on Eenie Meenie Minie Moe by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 5:16 AM
funny
on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 4:28 AM
edna talking crap again. free speech is cool, but thats more like an article in the paper than a poem. it don't deserve its ratings
on Memories Of Home by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 4:41 AM
thats the type of thing you would write straight from your head onto a page when drunk. sorry dame edna
on A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 4:44 AM
quite good
on Musical Buttocks - Cha cha cha by Edna Sweetlove
14 Oct 2006, 5:04 AM
i really like the 'left an unfinished movement on his piano stool'.
i like the first four lines too. but after that ...
but come on...'FART'..AGAIN??!! you practically mention them in all your writing.you mention your name again..you mention sex again..you mention the word 'fuck' or a version of it again..
i like the first four lines too. but after that ...
but come on...'FART'..AGAIN??!! you practically mention them in all your writing.you mention your name again..you mention sex again..you mention the word 'fuck' or a version of it again..
on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove
11 Oct 2006, 4:47 AM
disgusting. try changing the characters to your mother and brother and see if its still as good.
on Figid Rrigid by Hostileintent
11 Oct 2006, 4:30 PM
tried a new format for this one....what do people think??
1underlying message (danger)split into its letters, each letter to start a sentence
2each sentence is 10 syllables
3each sentence composed of 2 parts
1st part of two words
2nd part of 3 words
4first and second words of each part relate
5last word in each line different, but rhyming????????
1underlying message (danger)split into its letters, each letter to start a sentence
2each sentence is 10 syllables
3each sentence composed of 2 parts
1st part of two words
2nd part of 3 words
4first and second words of each part relate
5last word in each line different, but rhyming????????
well worth the 9