poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Hostileintent and replies

Comments byHostileintent, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Eenie Meenie Minie Moe by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 5:16 AM
funny
on Limp Cock by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 5:13 AM
its okay
on Toe Jam Poem by EDNA by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 5:05 AM
total crap
on Musical Buttocks - Cha cha cha by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 5:04 AM
i really like the 'left an unfinished movement on his piano stool'.

i like the first four lines too. but after that ...

but come on...'FART'..AGAIN??!! you practically mention them in all your writing.you mention your name again..you mention sex again..you mention the word 'fuck' or a version of it again..
on Fun At The Gynaecologists by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 5:00 AM
once again edna. paint the picture perfectly (probably because you tell it like a short story), but go nowhere with it. i really have to agree with dvincent..its like a story, not a poem. is there a structure to any of your poetry??if their is, please tell me, because i would genuinely like to know.

and if you feel like telling me to get lost fine.. but fuck off from my writing too.
on Wanking In The Bucket by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 4:50 AM
you paint the scene well. but dont do it justice.
on Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 4:49 AM
what was the point of that?
on A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 4:44 AM
quite good
on Memories Of Home by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 4:41 AM
thats the type of thing you would write straight from your head onto a page when drunk. sorry dame edna
on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove 14 Oct 2006, 4:28 AM
edna talking crap again. free speech is cool, but thats more like an article in the paper than a poem. it don't deserve its ratings
replying on Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent 14 Oct 2006, 4:22 AM
please explain. we are not all as educated as you
on Figid Rrigid by Hostileintent 11 Oct 2006, 4:30 PM
tried a new format for this one....what do people think??

1underlying message (danger)split into its letters, each letter to start a sentence

2each sentence is 10 syllables

3each sentence composed of 2 parts
1st part of two words
2nd part of 3 words

4first and second words of each part relate

5last word in each line different, but rhyming????????
on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove 11 Oct 2006, 4:47 AM
disgusting. try changing the characters to your mother and brother and see if its still as good.
on how my life is dying by Hostileintent 9 Mar 2004, 4:59 AM
i'm miles from home,i'm pissed off. i'm hurting,i'm in a cafe,and i write.i write
on A Lovely Surprise by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 23 Sep 2003, 7:38 AM
interesting
well worth the 9
on In Memory of Princess Diana by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 23 Sep 2003, 7:37 AM
i like it. its clever.
10
replying on Boys with Guns by Hostileintent 19 Sep 2003, 7:20 AM
i fucking lived in one of these places. ive seen it so fuck yourself
replying on Boys with Guns by Hostileintent 19 Sep 2003, 7:20 AM
you sad bastard. go fuck yourself, you snob. 'where can i find such pictures' he asks. well ill tell you, amnesty international.
on That Girl by Nicholas Monson 17 Aug 2003, 10:30 AM
the last half of the last line is kinda out of tune with the rest, but all round, i like it. 9

take a gander at my one 'confession of a troubled man' tell me what you think,in a vote or otherwise
on Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent 17 Aug 2003, 10:24 AM
please put a vote on the poem, bad or good, just vote.any comments are more than welcome