aged:18

endgame:self expression through words

how far you're to go:general gist

thanks for the review

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never thought of translating it sorry. here is the translation for the last two stanzas:

Yes.Sport is extremely important
Perhaps it's the most important
But the don't put an emphasis,on sport as a whole
What about free development, Nothing

I now understand the life of the teenager
I see it's full of filthy dirty injustice
But overall- Saint Munchins College has brought
Me to a man from a naive teenager
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the sport refers to the fact that my school always prided itself on its sport,but the fact is that it is a rugby school.rugby only.other sport is shunned.so i say 'how can one develop freely'

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thanks for the comments and support everybody.much appreciated.

yea. i put this poem in last year in a competition.got to the semi. when in school i studied the work of Gerard Manley Hopkins. i loved him,and his so many unique styles. i just took one, which as you said is, splitting the line up into two,and putting the first part last.thanks for the comments

first of all, thanks for the comments.

second,i like it.it is, what seems to me, to be quite nostalgic.i duno, i have always had a thing for personal and nostalgic poetry,and this fits in here.very well written. 10

good use of imagery and emotion.creates a nice scene in the mind.i like it.

question:any chance you could review 2 of my peoms? 'Memory' and 'Incomplete'? i would really appreciate it

supreme. i like the feeling in it.the imagery is so vivid.

question:i have asked a few people to look at the last two in my list,would you too?

I like it.Very symbolic.

question:any chance you could look and review mine, the last two on my list?

a work of art.lessson for us all.

how is that a poem?

come on, a bit of effort.nice imagery, but it could be much better