replying on Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Dec 2003, 3:07 PM
you like trying...
replying on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined
3 Dec 2003, 2:10 PM
which was?
on Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Dec 2003, 2:07 PM
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
replying on The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker
3 Dec 2003, 2:04 PM
well stop abusing them then, freak.
on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined
3 Dec 2003, 11:10 AM
It's ok. I don't know...I just don't like it.
on How Many Miles? by miraclemaker
3 Dec 2003, 11:08 AM
hmm, interesting.
on The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker
3 Dec 2003, 11:06 AM
MJ IS INNOCENT!
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
3 Dec 2003, 11:03 AM
If you took out some of the excessive -so's- it would be so much better. ;-)
on Virgin Poet by emilyowey
2 Dec 2003, 3:43 PM
SCHWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! I LOVE this poem. The flow, the vocab, the forward thrusting cadence. 10!
on Smiling by Jill Stockinger
2 Dec 2003, 3:05 PM
I'm not sure what's more interesting, the flow, structure, depth, simplicity, or the votes and comments. hehe. Good piece.
on Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz
14 Nov 2003, 11:35 AM
I love it. I agree with Tranny. Marshmallow loses the fine wine flavor that permeates throughout the rest of the poem. Good one.
replying on Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly
7 Nov 2003, 3:35 PM
niiiiiiiiiiiiiice
on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
7 Nov 2003, 2:24 PM
she-car
on Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly
7 Nov 2003, 2:16 PM
was it a wet paper bag?
on I don't like fish by INTRANSIT
7 Nov 2003, 2:11 PM
fish smells like fingers.
replying on untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone
27 Oct 2003, 2:24 PM
was it inspired by ur ran over dog fido? lol...
on The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
27 Oct 2003, 10:06 AM
You see, a backspace is eternally depressed,
Submerged deep in the sanguine depths,
Of illiterate logic,
A child's voice is heard nonetheless.
--nice, very nice. Actually Dave, your humor has, in the past, inspired me to not take things so seriously.
Good stuff.
Submerged deep in the sanguine depths,
Of illiterate logic,
A child's voice is heard nonetheless.
--nice, very nice. Actually Dave, your humor has, in the past, inspired me to not take things so seriously.
Good stuff.
replying on The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
27 Oct 2003, 10:05 AM
It would be mysterious, coming from someone excreted from his mothers arse.
on untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone
27 Oct 2003, 10:02 AM
hmmm, seems a bit dry. The laughing at funerals part has potential, but yeah...it's a bit dry. Like toast without butter.