replying on Why by J.B. Manning
8 Sep 2003, 10:31 AM
Joe's just pissed cuz I dissed his weak ass poetry. That and he hates men who like sex with men because he confuses it with his father having sex with him. Not the same thing Joe, sorry. Get over it, it's in the past...move on...you're special...REALLY. No body thinks less of you for enjoying your fathers questing interest in you. :-)
replying on cold sonnet by <~>
5 Sep 2003, 3:51 PM
I can too. lol. I wouldn't define it as drivel though.
replying on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge
5 Sep 2003, 3:40 PM
Dark you can go sit on this poem man. Or maybe you and your chrissy bitches are out burning more innocent people and calling them witches. Too busy to admit that what you really enjoy is a good book shuved up your ASS!
on cold sonnet by <~>
4 Sep 2003, 4:58 PM
I did like some of it, but I agree, it was a bit wordy and I had trouble staying focused through the middle of it...too much going on.
on Plum diggity by tadpole
4 Sep 2003, 4:53 PM
hmmmmm
on A Poem For World Peace. by GAY AS FU*K
4 Sep 2003, 4:32 PM
How old are you? If you're like 12, this is a great poem. Good thoughts and I agree with your motivation for writing it, but it's painful. right fight right fight right fight right fight.
replying on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
4 Sep 2003, 4:27 PM
lol - so much religious reference on this site. It should be called holy poem ranker dot com...or some shit. lol
replying on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
4 Sep 2003, 4:18 PM
I appreciate your input, but you know, saying something isn't original is hardly original and really, what IS original? Everything we do has already been done in some form or fashion before...hmmm, seems like a poem in itself. haha.
on To a bum, by RealmOfSong
4 Sep 2003, 1:26 PM
I like it a lot, but I'm slightly confused by the title vs. the context. It seems more like you're talking to a familiar acquaintance of some sort, rather than a stranger on the street. Or maybe you're calling that acquaintance a loser of life? Hmm, that could be what I originally missed.
replying on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 2:26 PM
i don't recall if I have or not. It sounds familiar, but I read so many in a day.
No worries. To each his own. I enjoyed writing it.
No worries. To each his own. I enjoyed writing it.
replying on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 1:24 PM
haha ok
replying on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 1:23 PM
Do you mean me? I don't make "Strange" bed fellows. My boyfriend is by far one of the least, "Strange" people I have ever met.
on R.O.X. by InvertedEar
3 Sep 2003, 1:21 PM
I can't imagine what it would sound like in song, but I'm nothing of a song writer. However, it does a make beautiful rhythm as it flows through my thoughts. I like it.
on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 1:17 PM
ooooh, I love this one.
allow Your mushroom brush to paint me white - Oh man, that's like the second kewlest thing I've ever heard!
allow Your mushroom brush to paint me white - Oh man, that's like the second kewlest thing I've ever heard!
replying on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 1:05 PM
comments with no vote? ;-)
on Curiously here by philthegreek
3 Sep 2003, 1:02 PM
hmmm. I'd say that this poem made me feel like nothing at all...just.............
replying on White Veil by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 12:54 PM
some things here are included to add that wow? What things would they be?
on Nitemareweaver by William Delacroix
2 Sep 2003, 4:52 PM
The quality of the poem isn't that great. The feeling seems to be there, but I'm not sure you're feeling what you're saying, WHEN you're saying it.
As for electroman1979s comment, puke on you bible thumper.
As for electroman1979s comment, puke on you bible thumper.
on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
2 Sep 2003, 4:40 PM
I can't believe anyone would give it a ten.