on At First sight by Nirvana13666
18 Sep 2003, 9:15 AM
Dull.
on KANGAROO WITH A DIDGERIDOO by Garrett S Sexton
18 Sep 2003, 5:45 PM
A kangaroo with a didgeridoo? Just imagine that! Whatever next!?
on Boys with Guns by Hostileintent
19 Sep 2003, 7:14 AM
No. Where can I find such pictures?
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 7:44 AM
I think it's very brave of you to post such an honest self-analysis. -9-
on MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
19 Sep 2003, 5:13 PM
The idea behind this poem was to condense all my feelings into a single word, and thus create a poem which has the maximum possible concentration of emotion.
on The words of touch by TheVoiceless
19 Sep 2003, 4:29 PM
[x]Devoid of content.
on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik
19 Sep 2003, 4:56 PM
Wow, that's true actually. -10-. Did you mean in a literal sense, i.e God impregnated Mary withour her consent, or just in some sort of crappy metaphorical sense.
on Lucky Joe Finds a Ring by DreamerSupreme
18 Sep 2003, 5:39 PM
Both charming and fragrant. A triumph! -6-
on some deleted poem
18 Sep 2003, 5:40 PM
Oh, what it is to be loved!
on Before The Sun by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Sep 2003, 5:42 PM
Perpendicular without being farcical. A beautiful compromise. -8-
on Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos
19 Sep 2003, 7:50 AM
I expect you fashioned all of your own belongings from a collection of sticks and wheat.
on some deleted poem
18 Sep 2003, 9:13 AM
Do you enjoy sex? Why not join the sex club?
on some deleted poem
18 Sep 2003, 8:04 AM
Quite good. -6-
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 9:00 AM
So why does this poem have loads of lines all offset? (I asked <~> the same question and was given, I think, a reasonable reply, but I can't see the reason here.) Are you trying to express yourself through use of the spacebar? Justify yourself now.
on reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme
17 Sep 2003, 9:08 AM
I really enjoyed reading this poem!!!
on Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
18 Sep 2003, 3:26 PM
This poem is semi-autobiographical.
on A Haiku Haiku by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
18 Sep 2003, 2:45 PM
Additional credits: -=Dark_Angel=-
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 4:49 PM
Suggested title: "Rubbish poem ahoy!"
on I hate your guts and think you're stupid by horus8
20 Sep 2003, 4:07 PM
Crude and spiteful -0-