poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bachus (481-500)

Comments byBachus, 481–500 back. Include replies

on My Dark Power by The Martyr 10 May 2003, 11:36 AM
That makes the two of us.
on The Martyr (Without A Cause) by The Martyr 9 May 2003, 7:53 PM
For Palestine West Virginia's favoutite vagina Laci Peterson.
sepulchral, or sepulcher, but not what you have, because it's not a word. Other then that, there are about ten grammaric goof ups and a couple other typos, but it's the thought that counts.
on some deleted poem 9 May 2003, 12:12 PM
Oh yeah... Now that's addiction. Yesterday, I saw a pack of Setraline addicts destroying a neighbors bike basket and rose bush. The look in their eyes was terrifying almost even heart stopping, but then I realized I hadn't taken my methadone, and perhaps had been a bit quick to judge.
on Cabin by the lake by psikosis 9 May 2003, 12:18 PM
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
on 2 by psikosis 9 May 2003, 12:22 PM
Change tyme to thyme and brings to flings.
on Sanctuary by Lolly 9 May 2003, 12:02 PM
I would change thin to thick, really. 9. (this was the best poem i've read in a bit, probably the last 30 congradulations)
on Untitled by js560000 9 May 2003, 7:50 PM
Metallica, did it better and bolder.
on some deleted poem 9 May 2003, 12:15 PM
Specifically, unspecific, and better off for it.
on Emoticon by psikosis 9 May 2003, 12:20 PM
Good Question! Horrible poem.
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin 29 Apr 2003, 12:31 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!! what? You're kidding right? lol. I'll bring the greater and lesser key of Solomon just in case.
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin 29 Apr 2003, 12:34 AM
"On this day, I have found fear..." Ahbdul Alhazar 'the mad arab'. (from the Necronomicon)
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin 29 Apr 2003, 12:38 AM
Necronomicon
Death, madness and Cthulu.
Let's swallow some souls.


on moments lost in adversity by brazen 29 Apr 2003, 12:41 AM
You make me feel guilty, and I wash my hands a lot?
on Stoner Rant#1-Mnkypo's razor by Crakyamuni 26 Apr 2003, 4:47 PM
Not if the artist has the address of the purchasers home. Then he could break in with his palette and paint mustaches everywhere.
on ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~ 26 Apr 2003, 4:51 PM
Well, first off, try not to write it down.
Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.
on some deleted poem 26 Apr 2003, 8:19 PM
You excepted the booze because subliminaly, the tv told you to. That, and in real life you're a 52 year old relapsing songwriter for Clint Black.
on I Speak of Expanses by anitawit 25 Apr 2003, 8:59 PM
good, but I would end losing the last line instead for another line of impeccably aloof metaphors.
on Trichomanic Sexless Bitch by superskunky1 9 May 2003, 11:58 AM
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
on My final poem by lee's tommy 9 May 2003, 12:05 PM
Shit.