on B.F. by skaskowski
9 Oct 2003, 3:55 PM
Lai
replying on Why do you give yourself blue tens? by Bachus
9 Oct 2003, 11:01 AM
I can't, I pled the fifth. lol.
on facku by J.B. Manning
9 Oct 2003, 10:55 AM
Do.
replying on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker
9 Oct 2003, 10:50 AM
Well then "dunse" is dunce. You're welcome.
on Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet
9 Oct 2003, 9:30 AM
"the day children killed Jesus's great grandson." I would drop this line altogether, and end at the line before it.
on Never Love A Poet by Caducus
9 Oct 2003, 9:27 AM
Robert Johnson's "Phonograph blues". (That's what I was listening to while just reading this). How are you? I missed you.
on Primal Reality by peaceseeker
7 Oct 2003, 7:04 PM
my only critique would be it should be compressed by two. In other words each line should take on the line below it doubling each line but making the actual physical poem smaller by a half.
on The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil by Bachus
7 Oct 2003, 6:29 PM
The sheer genius is in the kneading of the dough. Yeah, so what if I'm into getting my nails done? it's better then using my teeth.
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 8:31 PM
You obviously haven't done your homework. I suggest you view my homepages or look me up on the Imdb.com. I sir, am a bonafide dandy, and quite the lady's man. I'm gentle, handsome, and highly sophisticated. I think you should call the FBI.
on The man, the world by INTRANSIT
3 Oct 2003, 12:51 PM
ahaaahhaahahahah, feezus that was ahoot. 9.
replying on The Western World by mrpresident
3 Oct 2003, 12:08 AM
I wish you were too.
on a rapid expenditure by skaskowski
2 Oct 2003, 12:02 PM
Surely.
The last time I smelled a Temptation? he spun around splashing lukewarm jerry curl juice upon my naked buttocks. Naturally, I instantly climaxed in a heap of off Navy blue jelly and fuzzy toenail clipping pearljam to suck my thumb and coo. LIKE A REAL MAN in an unreal world full of hate and 7 elevens. I'm so sad so so damn sad *sniffle*.
on time's concubine by skaskowski
2 Oct 2003, 11:48 AM
So-So. I've seen better from you.
replying on The Fucktory by horus8
2 Oct 2003, 11:11 AM
Woah, you've seen fear distrubuted? excellent, what a rare and majestic occurence for you to have witnessed. It what form was it packaged and passed out? Can, foam with saran wrap, or digitally remastered.
replying on The Fucktory by horus8
2 Oct 2003, 11:07 AM
Outstanding! Except, I'm not the guy in the story. It's a fictional piece about a nonfictional reality. See how that works? Because, what you don't know is that I actually am a black jewish dwarf lesbian with a prostetic face. Therefore, it would be impractical and foolish to say I was a bigot, a racist or, a gay poet, or even a Toyota Camry.
I personally agree with you. Except for the part with the old big screen tv 'action' there are wonderfull fantastic images happening there. It's just that you're English and not 'getting' it. See, in America, they do this weird thing late at night when every one's sleeping. They hype up our GREAT NATION with various tributes and handsaluting and gun salutes and flags and children and TORCHES that torch permanently. And trust me when I say it's fantastical to the MAX! the rest, be assured, you are absolutely accurate about.
on Wasted Words by ho_hum
27 Sep 2003, 12:30 PM
Except, the word of THE CRAFTY JESU!
replying on >~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~< by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
26 Sep 2003, 7:00 PM
I like that you,ve made this a Sonnet now!...? uhhh, Chud is an American movie from the eighties about monsters in the sewers, and Tron, well, Tron is Tron for christ sake? Put them together and there you have it.