on Seven Little Pills by kaykat
23 Dec 2002, 12:35 PM
okay here goes. i went to see your homepage, and i'm a bit confused did you get the pills from, mom, britt, or just some weird doctor. lol. also are you a real distressed human young lady, or a drunk old lonely man with a crippled and psychotic imagination? regardless of all of that said..this poem is to punkrock what moist towelletes are to steak eaters at a casino somewhere in winnemucca nevada.
replying on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus
23 Dec 2002, 12:05 PM
for that guy in germany who took out an ad to kill someone, and before he killed the guy that showed up at his door ..they snacked on his 'stuff'. care for a weiner?
on strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 8:43 PM
i almost don't wanna see that last sentence. i thought is was perfect up until that ummm. think on that then i'll come back and vote later, but i'll probably will give it a ten, just for the last stanza alone(not including last sentence) read that bad boy ten times out loud by itself. lol. strong strudel filler batman. how well do you know razorgrin.?
replying on Live from Boise Idaho...the cads! by Bachus
22 Dec 2002, 8:27 PM
i find your comment to be uncooth, and the tall ones, i always keep, and since your not in room 101 at the standard currently, you're either not tall, or lying. <~
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
20 Dec 2002, 8:05 PM
i regret to inform that not only am i sane, but i can sit through a whole dinner without being rude or excusing myself early to smoke once. i am proud of myself and growing a little more 'spiritually' (physically) even as we speak. lol.
on Comfort Food by jessicazee
20 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM
"snug lumpia" are better than pierogis any day. this was a great poem and still will be later, after 'was'.
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
20 Dec 2002, 5:34 PM
when the infant is cradled it stops it's baby wailing perhaphs un-rocked? last stanza's gold.
you had my attention until you went "wassup", then i started picking my belly button and reading the globe again. what? no nitros? tsk. it's also a mind crunch to read and really bloated, you could of said it all with one sentence. "Stupid fucking rave full of complaisant retards, and then some." shame really. hope you're okay?
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
19 Dec 2002, 7:03 PM
"Of Jesue Christ will little think" this is my feel good sentence of the week lol, and for that you my friend get the kale GUN on full automatic!calcium rich greeness, all for you, and later if your lucky i'll let you scrub my hoof. change air to dirt, christmas to labor day, and bethlem to bangcock to really get the gelt of it.
on Form Without Substance by Quarton
19 Dec 2002, 6:35 PM
anything but a crying clown, lordy. "Fresh washed flora covered with grime". funny. quantum physics aye. jesus. here, i got one for you. i walked inside just to be let out. because...well..the cosmic dance said i could.
on THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
unicorn blood and strudels. no!
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 3:54 PM
yep..that's how they do it..yesterday it was england that was big in germany and today it's hannibal. jesus. but did they really have snack time scrotum?
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
good point, i like that idea.
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
it dissapeared. anyway. are you serious about the german thing, cuz that's funny.
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 3:46 PM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
you see, my invented word has 'more' symbolic significance..it reeks of multifaceted hurdles to find and climb because i'm a poet. i can spell it backwards "tramllaw" "TRAMLLAW DAMNIT" pay attention damnit "tramllaw" if your not more carefull you'll not get the fruitbasket with cheap shampagnee and greening cheze'.
you see, my invented word has 'more' symbolic significance..it reeks of multifaceted hurdles to find and climb because i'm a poet. i can spell it backwards "tramllaw" "TRAMLLAW DAMNIT" pay attention damnit "tramllaw" if your not more carefull you'll not get the fruitbasket with cheap shampagnee and greening cheze'.
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
yeah i know, that's where good poets like you wack it with a zero, and go "take that 'loseit in the translationboy'"! and then i go "NO!NO! NOT THAT".
on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
19 Dec 2002, 1:55 PM
you'd know.o