on Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart
14 Dec 2002, 8:42 PM
themselfs should be them-damn-shelves, courg should be porridge, interrestag shoulde be the 'stag of longevity', and w should be pooter out also it should be more spontaneous and less thought out. try more funk in the vagina, or a nice flesh eating bacteria.,
horus8 has never been to taos, never been to kilmer's ranch, HAS NEVER EVER WRITTEN a song for anyone but me, ha! ha! he hasn't left his home in years, and most assuredly is doing no movie with jon voight...he is a sick..sick bastard, and on his way out. out the window with a pillow case full of model glue and sprite. a filthy liar..a true mother fucker! we're planning a coup de ta..soon we will assimilate 'vagina' the three legged pigeon..victory will be ours. would anyone care for a bowl of finger foods? i'm ringing the kitchen as we speak.
on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun
14 Dec 2002, 11:53 AM
i can relate, to eating boogers that big, and smelling my hand after i swipe at my scrotum =)
horus8 is preparing for a coors light audition, Ranger, so i will be speaking on his behalf, first off, the poem is a sure dandy, but the serial number at the bottom unless it means June, 2001 by jody conn (which it does whoops!) so back to first off again ah...i don't think 'jody' needs any constructive criticism..i believe that she has a fine grasp on her writing and is aware of what she's doing, so back to why horus8 hated the poem in is words "cheesy vagina banter best left for dike bars or a stage performance of the vagina monolouges" here is it's male coonter part in two minutes using two of my five last braincells [To Blow (free verse) by Bachus
A hard blow on whithered shaft.
A lackluster sobbing rod.
This turd-scented naked pud.
I suck by the hour.
Like pittiful piss with tasteless dour.
Such hard and dispicable horror.
All lust and visions abandoned.
This Richard (dik) never ours to blow.
BFD122002
but now feeling exhausted from the strain of writing that equally inspiring piece, Ranger...i will nap..here's a ten for your earnest..hopes, dreams, sense of justice..merry christmas.10! <for the amount of layers involved in it all well the two layers, anyway>
A hard blow on whithered shaft.
A lackluster sobbing rod.
This turd-scented naked pud.
I suck by the hour.
Like pittiful piss with tasteless dour.
Such hard and dispicable horror.
All lust and visions abandoned.
This Richard (dik) never ours to blow.
BFD122002
but now feeling exhausted from the strain of writing that equally inspiring piece, Ranger...i will nap..here's a ten for your earnest..hopes, dreams, sense of justice..merry christmas.10! <for the amount of layers involved in it all well the two layers, anyway>
replying on Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus
13 Dec 2002, 3:18 PM
was he a judge on american idol?
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
13 Dec 2002, 3:05 PM
i agree...i liked the decepticons so much cooler of a name than the autobots, also the cartoons theme song, harder to quit hummimg than the a-teams, or the smurfs..i hate good jingles, they're like herpes...relentless.
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
13 Dec 2002, 3:02 PM
interesting...what might he turn into? a faiery mound or a clear running brook. yes, disturbing indeed.
on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum
12 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM
HOW DARE YE BESMIRCH THE MIGRATING ELDERLY! is there; heaven, bingo, and the four corners trip? i just bet.
on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones
12 Dec 2002, 6:15 PM
don't! the fish haven't eaten, and sadly do to the drought the water's only 6 inches deep.t
on Fruit Punch by teacup
12 Dec 2002, 6:13 PM
ha as a aha ha! hee. ohhhh?s
on Hunt <3 by Plasticgirlwithgun
12 Dec 2002, 6:03 PM
my father's advice to me was treat them bad they'll love you more, love them more they'll treat you bad. it's sad really, but with the right balance and timing true.e
on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
12 Dec 2002, 5:39 PM
Cree-yaw..hee ha! hee hee ha...ah chicky wicky shaw. tonight for dinner me thinks porterhouse steak 13 oz, some sierra nevada pale ale (4, 12oz)..i oz. of horse radish creamy..and a baked potatoes 7 oz, with an oz..of sour cream & chives and butter, a side of spinach w'parmessian 4 oz appetizer? a vanilla stoili 2 oz one indica joint 1 gram.desert? hardcore gay sex and special k with a shot of tequilla..than a nice shower with extra soft water...leaves me with that slippery feeling. over all calories earned to those burned uncalcuable. do to unlimited variables....b
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
12 Dec 2002, 5:18 PM
the evolution of organisms and technology.?
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
12 Dec 2002, 5:16 PM
i don't know? perhaps bigfoot and mermaids?
replying on Some asshole with a shit band. by Plasticgirlwithgun
12 Dec 2002, 3:28 PM
It? the horrible balding, the poem, or the scoobie doobie?n
on Some asshole with a shit band. by Plasticgirlwithgun
12 Dec 2002, 3:24 PM
"running around robbing banks all whacked out on scoobie snacks" [fun loving criminals] this is really an admirable piece, unless it's about the cads,than it's admonishable.
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
12 Dec 2002, 2:09 AM
actually, it's oingo boingo in my headphones, there are no re-runs in soap operas..