on mass transit by silentcat
31 Jul 2002, 10:14 AM
I feel you in the worst way... well put, Da1
on scarred by TheVampireLeStan
31 Jul 2002, 10:13 AM
Gothic confessions, no? you must wear long sleeves
on You Were There by danevie
31 Jul 2002, 10:10 AM
Next.
on Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn
31 Jul 2002, 10:08 AM
this should be printed on condom packages to increase sales, cuz DAMN! It's just lovely enough...Da1 w/ no lubrication --smile--
on The Wrong Choice by TheVampireLeStan
31 Jul 2002, 9:58 AM
inspirational and a profound illustration of the true consequence a foolish action... Da1 (my sister tried to commit suicide)
on What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583
31 Jul 2002, 9:47 AM
opinionated but i guess that's "poetry"...Keep it up and as real as possible, Da1
on Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583
31 Jul 2002, 9:40 AM
Very cool
on red snow by sainthypro
31 Jul 2002, 9:21 AM
oooohh, deep indeed. Could probably do without the second "dreaming, scheming" in stanza2. or not? Da1 said it.
on Lonely Night by faded
31 Jul 2002, 9:13 AM
A lifetime on the flipside... I definitely like, Da1
on Glory Bound by kazeaki
31 Jul 2002, 9:08 AM
profound & illustrious... would go good with a danish and a machiatto right about now... Da1(on an empty stomach)
on Another Faceless Vulgar by danzigg
31 Jul 2002, 9:03 AM
This peice is providentially elegent and well organized... Da1, holla back.
on The Way You Could Say Nothing (But still I understood) by frostygirl
30 Jul 2002, 11:03 PM
lovely, in a Dawson's Creek sort of way.. but it puts you there...Da1 says U GO GIRL, get your frost on
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
30 Jul 2002, 10:54 PM
wrong one my bad
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
30 Jul 2002, 10:52 PM
Boooooring...
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
30 Jul 2002, 10:50 PM
I feel this is a masterpeice spewed from and afflicted mind of illicit fantasy. i am impressed w/ your diversity, but remaining humorousness... Da1 a man of few validating words
on CoffeeNoBody by webguy
30 Jul 2002, 8:14 PM
Man that poem was 'STUPID BANANAS',
w/ a starbucks twist on the nightlife that was just JUICY CRAZY... Da1 said to be heard
w/ a starbucks twist on the nightlife that was just JUICY CRAZY... Da1 said to be heard
on the lips of your mouth by silvertongueddevil
30 Jul 2002, 8:04 PM
oooohhhhh
on Cherished Childhood by Sigh'ense...
30 Jul 2002, 7:55 PM
well im out for the week until the next moon, see you soon... i wish we could submit more than 4 poems at a time but im patient. over anxiousness is the death of us all
on Cherished Childhood by Sigh'ense...
30 Jul 2002, 7:52 PM
thanks for your support and i can particularly appreciate how you present a dimented saavy about you craft. good luck with your career and family Horus
on Cherished Childhood by Sigh'ense...
30 Jul 2002, 7:50 PM