on Coloring Loss by molly
30 Jul 2002, 7:22 PM
there should be visual artwork of some medium created in concordance w/ this intire poem, because it is literary art in its own essence...Da1 thinks he's in love.--smile-- --i said smile damnit!--
on Disenchanted by molly
30 Jul 2002, 7:14 PM
"woman" and "change", my bad.
..Da1
..Da1
on Disenchanted by molly
30 Jul 2002, 7:12 PM
well I quess you told me.
Color me crunchy.
by the way yet another mezmorizing peice and im not just trying to get in your knockers.it's so innocent and prissy if you arent a women you should get a sex cahnge
Color me crunchy.
by the way yet another mezmorizing peice and im not just trying to get in your knockers.it's so innocent and prissy if you arent a women you should get a sex cahnge
on HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi
30 Jul 2002, 6:52 PM
"realise" is actually spelled "realize"...
just something I... noticed.
4 future referrence,
Da1
just something I... noticed.
4 future referrence,
Da1
on My Life as a Book by molly
30 Jul 2002, 6:47 PM
I'd love to secretly read your diary...--smile-- conjuctively uprising and amusing...
says Da1 w/ lip gloss handy.
says Da1 w/ lip gloss handy.
on Her Wildfire Addiction by molly
30 Jul 2002, 6:43 PM
A bleeding heart,
is the spark
of this worlds retribution from the dark...
Keep caring girl, Da1....
is the spark
of this worlds retribution from the dark...
Keep caring girl, Da1....
on Compassion by Kashi
30 Jul 2002, 5:11 PM
it makes you think, but in my opinion( if itmatters at all) it needs more poess and exclusiveness. in other words, " it would be better if the beginning line was developed possibly or if there was more of a revelation in its conclusion, like I've gathered you were shooting for.. anywayz, maybe both would help.
just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.
just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.
on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...
30 Jul 2002, 4:31 PM
I truly appreciate the critque Horus.
Good lookin', and stay up.
Da1
Good lookin', and stay up.
Da1
on liberation by silentcat
30 Jul 2002, 4:03 PM
GONE HEAD WICHA SELF...