on Britain-y Speared by kingit
30 Nov 2003, 9:53 PM
cayn'y no-one tuch this uh!?
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2003, 11:16 PM
magnificent meatpipe!
on Intersection by INTRANSIT
26 Nov 2003, 8:55 AM
probe my pole, i dig yer hole
on Lines and half lines by aliena
26 Nov 2003, 8:44 AM
You need to be mounted! (leave "IT" alone) on a ceiling
on cause & Affect by kingit
26 Nov 2003, 5:32 PM
baby-shit
on A Good Stretch by kingit
29 Nov 2003, 9:19 PM
only one other has said so-...began unintentionally, I thought IT deterred, but...ffffffffffff. YES- sex, you are a smart feller. I enjoy the bulk of your werk.
on Leap! by Jill Stockinger
1 Dec 2003, 9:27 PM
nice clear thought-line...finally. acquiesced with a 10!
on some deleted poem
1 Dec 2003, 9:38 PM
Fairly decent, though, not your best by far. Dissappointing end.
on some deleted poem
1 Dec 2003, 9:42 PM
The 59th second of the 59th minute & my mum likes IT too! acquiesced with a 10!
on some deleted poem
1 Dec 2003, 9:49 PM
phhh! or?
on some deleted poem
1 Dec 2003, 9:53 PM
that horus comment betters the poeme(?)!! Last stanza is best.
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2003, 3:11 PM
There we go...voila! note to self; ease up on the absinthe, bonehead!
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2003, 11:34 PM
thank you for the break-down. Must remember not to forget...scintillating!
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2003, 2:26 PM
I stuggle for meaning but enjoy the melody(?)...i'm a ding-dong, excuse me, I can't give you anything constructive, will a 7 do?
on Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
7 Dec 2003, 5:44 PM
Are you Zodiac?