on Yield by wilco
29 Sep 2005, 9:47 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry! Picked up steam and ended perfectly. No need to be sung. *10* *10* *10*
replying on Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic
30 Aug 2005, 6:03 PM
Damn it! You forgot your side-order of funny with your shit sandwich. Please, never deliver a low blow like poetry.com though. It disgraces the universe.
replying on On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic
3 Aug 2005, 2:39 PM
It's, "as WELL as you write". Besides, I do comment as well as I farking write-if not better.
on Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp
2 Aug 2005, 1:32 PM
Absurd! Wonderfully Potato! Superb poem without the potatoing as well! *10*
on untitled by AaronJKeating
2 Aug 2005, 11:08 AM
Glorious imagery. Just great. Loved it all the way. *10*
on Life is not serious by daggatolar
2 Aug 2005, 11:07 AM
A bit jumbled. *7*
on writers block by Jesus' Pedometer
2 Aug 2005, 11:03 AM
Ha! Always an uphill...what's the word? Darn it! *9*
on HOW IT USUALLY ENDS! by pennymarie
2 Aug 2005, 11:01 AM
The first stanza ruined it for me, sorry. *6*
on Wars Between Held Breath's by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Aug 2005, 11:00 AM
englsih? that's ironic.
on Wars Between Held Breath's by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Aug 2005, 10:59 AM
Better englsih translation and you've got a solid bedtime story here. *7*
How old are you? Are you expecting positive feedback with this load? Just use the word "fuck", nobody holds it against you. What we do hold against you is your poor spelling, rudimentary grammar, and total lack of poetic understanding. "Tragedic"? COME ON! *2*
on SO LONG MY BELOVED by prettyktm
2 Aug 2005, 10:54 AM
Not too many soldiers pussy out like this, and please don't just repeat in the last stanza what you said in the first stanza. I know it's free verse, but the structuring is pitiful. *4*
on Forgiveness by Niphredil
2 Aug 2005, 10:49 AM
Very good! I loved "before your blood congeals into hate". Could've done without the misplaced last line. *9*
on Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick
2 Aug 2005, 10:47 AM
It would be more intriguing if it wasn't written like it just came out of "Where the Sidewalk Ends". *7*
on After He Left by Dovina
2 Aug 2005, 10:44 AM
One of the best ending stanzas I have ever read, but the first one could use a bit of work. It makes sense, but the change in tenses and the last line-in the first stanza-is a bit grey. *9*
replying on Distance by MacFrantic
9 Mar 2005, 4:54 PM
Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare
8 Mar 2005, 9:53 PM
good. *9*