on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 9:20 PM
RION12
Q.If these "bitches" don't know anything about you,
nor do you care about them, nor do they have the
irrelevant ability to do things that you can do,
nor can they say shit to you, and you care more
about their ability to perform oral sex on a man
than the poem itself, then why comment?
A. you're a douchebag, and this poem is very
original and very good.
*10*
Q.If these "bitches" don't know anything about you,
nor do you care about them, nor do they have the
irrelevant ability to do things that you can do,
nor can they say shit to you, and you care more
about their ability to perform oral sex on a man
than the poem itself, then why comment?
A. you're a douchebag, and this poem is very
original and very good.
*10*
on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad
5 Mar 2005, 8:59 PM
Good
on Dustin(Incomplete) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Feb 2005, 9:41 AM
Hey! That name is my own, without the whole (incomplete) deal.
on The Critical and His Horse by MacFrantic
19 Feb 2005, 12:31 AM
I thank you to no limit.
on The Man I Love by Dovina
13 Feb 2005, 9:01 PM
if you say so. *6*
on Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu
13 Feb 2005, 9:52 AM
Ah, middle-eastern inspiration. I can't believe people failed to get this.
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
on Insanity by Lifeboatman
13 Feb 2005, 9:48 AM
Vinsanity! *5*
on broken pieces of a candy heart by brazen
13 Feb 2005, 9:47 AM
Wow, single stanzas are ruling write now. In this, it happens to be the last. *7*
on Starless by MacFrantic
13 Feb 2005, 9:45 AM
There really should be more werewolf poems.
replying on Starless by MacFrantic
13 Feb 2005, 9:44 AM
And 200 years ago, I'd have not been born to see you do so.
on Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco
12 Feb 2005, 8:25 PM
so good, very nice picture. *9*
on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
12 Feb 2005, 7:45 PM
definitely needs a line that stands out. *7*
on CUPID by al-naafiysh
12 Feb 2005, 7:42 PM
Man, that was such an entertaining poem! Little changes here and there-I won't be specific- and it's perfect! *10*
Can you put a single stanza in your "favorites" section?
Can you put a single stanza in your "favorites" section?
on Orion takes aim by oneglove
12 Feb 2005, 7:39 PM
Oh, please get rid of L4. *7*
on Kiss of a rose by backstreetdreamer
12 Feb 2005, 7:35 PM
Why not just call it "The Name of the Rose" *5*
on Blood and roses. by backstreetdreamer
12 Feb 2005, 7:34 PM
I can't believe I'm saying this, but if this had actually been a prose poem, I might have given it a higher score. And don't use "evermore" ever or more.
*8*
*8*
on Dreamtigers (Borges) by Sasha
12 Feb 2005, 7:29 PM
Only major problem- other than the whole "prose" thing-is the large space near the end. Find some way to fix it. *7* (I automatically deduct 1 point for prose, sorry)
Peeing in the kiddie pool while everyone was watching?
Or was it the episode of 7th heaven that changed your life?
Grow up and learn to use grammar correctly.
*4*