poemranker ::20 most recent comments by MacFrantic (81-100) and replies

Comments byMacFrantic, 81–100 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Moonlit Glare by Silverjackel 26 Feb 2006, 11:06 AM
Quaint and lovely. *8*
on Today's Spam by nentwined 26 Feb 2006, 11:03 AM
Not the best, but entertaining. *7*
on My Shattered Love by Silverjackel 26 Feb 2006, 11:01 AM
I just don't know, this is better than your other post, but the adj's seem extremely forced and the scheme is too formulaic. It makes you isolate and search for rhyme. *6*
on Into the Shadows I Crawl by Silverjackel 26 Feb 2006, 10:58 AM
Nothing particularly intriguing about this. Very mediocre. *6*
on An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta 26 Feb 2006, 10:53 AM
This is okay, a bit roundabout, I liked the Love of God theme and the ending. Could've been better *7*
replying on Iron Sky by MacFrantic 23 Feb 2006, 1:42 PM
Actually, I was refering to satirist Neal Pollack. The lack of commas is intentional. Also, "burden of her foil" is taken in a figurative sense, hence her cursing the sky.
on lost souls by aamir_trichy 21 Feb 2006, 6:30 AM
Ugh, this caves in fast. *4*
on Sunday i will dream again by Caducus 21 Feb 2006, 6:28 AM
This is very satisfying, but a few of the adj's seem forced. A I wish I could give you a 9.5, because with a couple tweaks this is an 11 for me. *9*
replying on First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before 21 Feb 2006, 6:24 AM
Agreed with Ranger, and there are still a few things that irk me. Maybe get rid of the "it" in "I cannot watch..." Great flow though. *7*
on writer's block by Zoetrope 10 Feb 2006, 3:52 PM
Impressive, in a word. *10*
on The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic 10 Feb 2006, 3:47 PM
oops, *they're*, goddamn it
replying on The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic 10 Feb 2006, 6:59 AM
Their not real, and thank you.
on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus 28 Jan 2006, 2:07 AM
I enjoyed the idea *7*
on Jailbird by zodiac 17 Jan 2006, 11:00 PM
Oh, if only I could express how great this truly is. *11*
on My Reason by PoeticXTC 17 Jan 2006, 10:57 PM
This could have been much better, still, *7*
on Spinning, reeling by ecargo 17 Jan 2006, 10:51 PM
Hah, this is pretty damn good, and I don't care at all about what you have to say. *9*
on Pain, I Curse Thee by woodstock20000 17 Jan 2006, 10:49 PM
I don't know why, but I like this.P-e-rish *7*
replying on Suck by MacFrantic 11 Jan 2006, 10:19 PM
that's my comment, sorry.
on Reckoning by <~> 10 Jan 2006, 1:32 PM
Second stanza is particularly brilliant, as are the others. Remarkable. *10*
replying on Szaehling by MacFrantic 9 Nov 2005, 8:44 PM
Nope, only a poet/jock/skeptic/actor I'm afraid.