on Diamonds & Glass by shit
3 Aug 2004, 10:34 PM
Response to P.S.: I am amused but all I cared about was the "static star" and the last line. *7*
on Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer
3 Aug 2004, 10:30 PM
Worthy of a dice toss at least
*12* wait...*2*...wait *8*
*12* wait...*2*...wait *8*
on Summer crush by sk8rs_rule_all
3 Aug 2004, 10:21 PM
Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha!
Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know?
But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know?
But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
on Summer crush by sk8rs_rule_all
3 Aug 2004, 10:21 PM
Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha!
Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know?
But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know?
But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
on Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw
3 Aug 2004, 10:08 PM
If this is poetry...well... then I am unbelievable in the sack...and we all know where...heh, touchè. *7*
on Ellis Evans: Rhyfel- War by Sasha
10 Jul 2004, 9:40 PM
Is that the literal translation, or did it just happen to rhyme in English as well? *10*
on Sugared petrol isn't sweet if your ass is black & blue. by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Jul 2004, 12:22 PM
This should really be under prose, which I dislike when associated with poetry, but nevertheless... *6*
replying on Ulterior Not Alterior by MacFrantic
8 Jul 2004, 12:15 PM
I'm glad you didn't miss the fact that I use cliches purposefully. But it would be nice if you realized that arguements often dissolve into analogies and familiar "-isms", or cliches. Aversion of these was not my aim.
replying on Urbane Jane by MacFrantic
7 Jul 2004, 7:07 PM
Good eye! I thank you!
replying on Urbane Jane by MacFrantic
6 Jul 2004, 10:52 AM
Personally, I believe that "ego" alone works splendidly. You guys are right about changing "faltered"
replying on Interrogation #1086637 by MacFrantic
26 Jun 2004, 6:28 PM
Thank you
on Thoughts Asunder by wilco
24 Jun 2004, 8:00 PM
Satisfying and all that. *10*
replying on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
23 Jun 2004, 10:50 AM
My vote for comment of the month*******
on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
22 Jun 2004, 11:01 PM
Congratulations on know knowing that you have have moved an athiest, with words, however disinterested in the message. *9*
on No choice in the matter by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:24 PM
Almost had it for a street performer... Statue!? Oh!
*heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*
*heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*
replying on Time Imperfect by MacFrantic
21 Jun 2004, 7:04 PM
I preferred to use *bearing* In the context of *offering*
on Sonnetias by MacFrantic
21 Jun 2004, 7:00 PM
As a footnote, the suffix *-ias* means a speech, or figure of speech, designed to move the passion.
on Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina
21 Jun 2004, 11:57 AM
Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*