on As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry
15 Aug 2004, 1:33 AM
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!
on Broken for Completion by Chasz Misleading
15 Aug 2004, 1:19 AM
not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*
on Fugitively Speaking by Dovina
15 Aug 2004, 1:18 AM
Like it a lot and that is that *9*
on Peppermint by fevriere
15 Aug 2004, 1:17 AM
Fantabulactifying! I think. *10*
on Guess the place! by Patsy
15 Aug 2004, 1:14 AM
*10* Take the time to spell check.
on 30,000 and falling by That One
15 Aug 2004, 1:12 AM
Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*
on Hope in a Bottle by timtonio
15 Aug 2004, 1:10 AM
Good, except for the part about a lazy eye. *9*
P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.
P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.
on Secret Love by ForgottenSoul17
15 Aug 2004, 1:07 AM
Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*
on Creator of Filth by hobojo
15 Aug 2004, 1:06 AM
What is this about? Your sister's period? Whatever. *6*
on Reality by Sirens_Voice
15 Aug 2004, 1:04 AM
Good idea... i myself like vagueness a lot. *8*
on Society by QuirkyWonder
15 Aug 2004, 1:02 AM
Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*
on today i just feel like swearing alot. But i won't. by Patsy
9 Aug 2004, 11:59 AM
*10.5*
on Reaction: Photo-Hung Over the Euphrates by eyrbare
9 Aug 2004, 11:38 AM
Wonderfully put, and I think that repeating "cold and black was perfect. *9*
on Mike Pike!! by DR Limerick
5 Aug 2004, 5:36 PM
And the coldness Mike's Pike didn't like
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on He Will Be Loved by eyrbare
3 Aug 2004, 10:47 PM
If Pinnochio had tear ducts he would weep and if I wasn't so lazy I'd rant. *5*
on nice day by New Life Drug
3 Aug 2004, 10:45 PM
I, in turn believe that the last line is fitting and I'd love to have you on my show. *9*
on My two cents by hobojo
3 Aug 2004, 10:40 PM
You're down two cents for that? Oh well, I would have put at least half of it into Viacom stock. *7*
on Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat
3 Aug 2004, 10:36 PM
Whenever I think of prose poem my train of thought just sto...