on simple silence by daniella
14 Oct 2002, 11:50 PM
perfect. 10
on After Halloween by Limness
14 Oct 2002, 11:47 PM
Stanza 2 is so perfect in it's vocalization. Lovely and sweet. Like hard candy rolled around in my mouth. I am a connoiseur of intelligent sorrow. Birds of a feather and all that. Thank you for the bittersweet treat.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Oct 2002, 12:50 PM
Your extraordinary gift for rhyme brings me great joy. Your stories are creative, funny and intelligently written. The shit theme is bizarre, but when it's well executed it's impossible complain. I always picture the most wonderful illustration when I read your tales, a la Mr. Gorey. Do you draw?
on One Country by poetandknowit
14 Oct 2002, 8:46 AM
We are good together. Despite the logistics, you have mixed somehow with my blood. You capture my core. We have our affinity. I am grateful to find you here, and in a sweet and strange way, I love you.
on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 8:19 AM
Well, he''s dressed in sorrow, compares himself to death, and grieves for his soul.
on Two Towers by Tascobar
14 Oct 2002, 8:17 AM
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 8:11 AM
Overwhelmed by snowmen? Have been raised in So.Cal. I suppose I'm not one to judge really. That's one scary snowman.
replying on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT
14 Oct 2002, 8:07 AM
Sorry no. He's a intimate friend, family really. He's my brother.
replying on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT
14 Oct 2002, 7:53 AM
let's see, I read this last night while at Horus8's house. I wasn't too impressed. Horus8 seemed to really get it and he loved "roll them in verbage". This poem is goofy to a certain extent. I realize when you say the dead you don't mean the dead, dead, but I can't help picturing corpse in various states of decomposition and me trying to resurrect them. Also the image of an army just feels anti-poet. Poets do not lead armies, as far as I know, can anyone tell me if a poet has ever lead an army? Does Lincoln count
on One Country by poetandknowit
14 Oct 2002, 12:34 AM
"Siempre mientiendo amor" really speaks to my conscience right now. Love is so frgile and dependent on the actors to sustain the illusion. If one decides not to play along anymore, the illusion is broken. I love our back and forth. It is a creative and satisifing business.
on One Country by poetandknowit
14 Oct 2002, 12:25 AM
Pero si no calmas los enojos. Me dejas ardiente, y deciendo el olvido. Cuantas veces en una sola vida sabre este dulce estar?
on Reptiles & Dust - Part One by Wulf
14 Oct 2002, 12:01 AM
My favorite of your poems. Many examples of the reach of your creativity. many many beautiful and truthful insights. I don't like the end. My favorite stanzas are 8,9 & 19. I know I will read this again.
on Introduction By Decree by Wulf
13 Oct 2002, 11:50 PM
Is the repetition intentional?
on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT
13 Oct 2002, 10:03 PM
I posted what i thought was a funny and well written commit, but then I submitted it under Horus8. I deleted the comment and now I can't come up with anything clever. I feel bad. I like being funny. I don't want a dead army. I don't understand your metaphor. Tickling the dead sounds gross. I don't want to do it.
on "REAL" People by Scouser
13 Oct 2002, 12:25 AM
You sorry little shit. You dare to write about democracy and then cram the ballot box with fake votes? You are a scumball. Best list my ass. You fall from the sky carrying a shit-pie and walk away with the blue-ribbon? I think not. I spit on you and your crappy poem. Your poem is not worthy enough to lick the shoes of my worst.
on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT
12 Oct 2002, 5:14 PM
The last image is the prize winner here. You probably know that already. I don't care for the hook line and sinker, except that it ties in with the last stanza. Could the cronies be fishing instead of butchering?
on Breeze by Nicholas Jones
11 Oct 2002, 8:18 AM
The middle line speaks to me on several levels, suprisingly. I'm in a sensitive mood.
on e-mail from a friend by josh_5o
10 Oct 2002, 11:36 PM
mostly excellent.
replying on the truth about poets by New Life Drug
10 Oct 2002, 11:22 PM
I don't believe you. Prove it.