replying on Fleas by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 9:55 AM
What does this have to do with a God complex? Your friend has discredited himself by posting nothing except a well known poem by a well loved poet which he atributes to himself. To the skilled eye, and there are many on this sight, this reveals a disrespect not only for our dear Mr. Nash, but also for this forum. His action also reveals an excess of stupidity. Is he stupid enough to believe we wouldn't recognize the poem or is he stupid enough to believe this would be funny? What is the bases of your defense for this moron? Friendship? Not good enough. Plagirism, no matter how ill excecuted is unexceptable through out our society. Why is he here? He has posted no work of his own, and the only comment he has left was a direct attack on a poet who confronted his criminal act. Yes, criminal. Look it up. You 2 yuck it up all you like, but it only serves to prove how socially inept you both are, and how much you still have yet to learn. poet&knowit takes a lot of pride in what he does for a living. He is a writer. One of his beloved fellow writers was taken atvantage of. He has every right to defend his mentor's honor.
on My Mamma's Hands by amateurR
19 Sep 2002, 4:30 PM
Not bad. Not good but not bad. There's no emotion. I going to a Dodger game and then I'm camping all weekend. Talk with you on Monday.
replying on Seasonal Lover by amateurR
19 Sep 2002, 4:24 PM
Is there a word for going away and coming back? Would fickle due?
replying on Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87
19 Sep 2002, 4:22 PM
Yes. Have you read any books of poetry? Which ones?
replying on Glassblowers by Christof
19 Sep 2002, 8:46 AM
Don't fool yourself, everything is meaningful. Even a good crap. Especially a good crap.
replying on Glassblowers by Christof
19 Sep 2002, 8:40 AM
Also, I think the poet is always a tourist. That's why we're able to write. I like you admitting to it.
replying on Glassblowers by Christof
19 Sep 2002, 8:38 AM
I like the fist line. It sets the scene. I don't have to waste brain time extracting it from the rest of the poem.
Wow, I literally pictured you with a curly-top toddler on your lap and the not so much older children sitting on the floor around you laughing at your stories. The beautiful wifey admiring the scene from the kitchen door(mixing spoon in hand) Go figure.
on Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w
19 Sep 2002, 8:16 AM
I went to the Levi 25 yrs of Punkorama last weekend. Took the boy, had loads of fun. I don't understand the last line. {?} at the end of the L6 looks awkward.
on Glassblowers by Christof
19 Sep 2002, 8:06 AM
Much tastier. I can't afford it either, but I'm the bull in the china shop.
on Seasonal Lover by amateurR
18 Sep 2002, 11:23 PM
Nature is unfaithful? to the seasons? That's absurd, she returns each year at the designated hour. Use an analogy that works.
on You're the Only One by Chels85
18 Sep 2002, 10:51 PM
The sentiment of the last 3 couplets is so beautiful, but this needs reconstructive surgery. The whole "you're the only one" line needs to be dropped. It's been used to death. Most of this is pretty bad. It's a vocal desert.
on Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87
18 Sep 2002, 10:29 PM
I'm curious, what books of poetry do 15 yr olds read these days? Seriously.