on Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8
18 Sep 2002, 10:18 PM
Ah the verbal gymnastics you put my neurons through. Personal trainer. Arsenal drainer. Rubber neck craner. Vegetable strainer. Confort zone maimer. Pinchi Cavrone.
replying on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 10:04 PM
I don't just rank all your stuff low. (Nice English) I read your submission and give my opinion and/or vote. I wish you would critique my work. By the way, I'm no lady.
on Operation: Nielsens by bondjedi
18 Sep 2002, 6:31 PM
I love this kind of untouched snapshot, although the last line doesn't quite finish the set up of the 1st 2.
on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
17 Sep 2002, 10:31 PM
You stun and amaze. A tonic for the ills of reading ugly navel lint poems. Praise Isis.
replying on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 8:03 AM
He's not around and I must leave. Instant gratification, add hot water, stir. I like the title.
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8
17 Sep 2002, 7:56 AM
Jesus Christ! An abudance of imaginative expression. It's difficult to leave you comments. I'm usually overwhelmed by your imagery and the accuracy of your observation. This one especially.
replying on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 7:44 AM
Zeenie, please explain. Is it that he can't it the honey because of the inherent state of hostility amongst the producers?
on Eternal Sleep by Artificial_Sweetner
16 Sep 2002, 8:49 PM
"lifes never been swell" gets a 0 and destroys all hope.
on Prisoner Of Reality by rottweiler1982
16 Sep 2002, 8:46 PM
Poetic justice? Typos. Reality has little to due with the punishment of sin. Reality punishes the good as well as the bad. She's not prejudice. Prisoner of Regret. Not horrible, but no grab. Rice cake poem.
on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8
16 Sep 2002, 8:35 PM
I sense aloof pain. Which is a man's territory. "That 5 yr old's shadow stretches on" Truth.
replying on Morning Conversation by lexicon
16 Sep 2002, 6:11 PM
As I said it's just a predilection of mine.
replying on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87
16 Sep 2002, 6:04 PM
I would tend to agree with you {--=Doylum=--}, but in extreme cases it's an option. Kind of like abortion. His comments are hurtful, yes hurtful. Best to delete the malignancy.
replying on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87
16 Sep 2002, 5:57 PM
You know you can delete Mr. shit-angels comments by pressing clicking on the red x.
on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87
16 Sep 2002, 5:42 PM
Who is this person? Start there. mother, sister, friend. Watch can become so many other things; attend, regard, mark, glimpse, etc... use a thesaurus it's your best friend. You'll hear some idiots spout stupidities about the illegitimacy of using one. Don't listen. All good poets use them. Infact try to find an old used thesaurus that isn't organized alphabetically. Take to reading it. That's an education.
" I mark your sleep. The lovely brown of your hair./ Your hands like..... It takes hours upon hours to work out a poem. The ones that come spontaneously are gifts, and have little to do witht he writers craft. Don't give up.
" I mark your sleep. The lovely brown of your hair./ Your hands like..... It takes hours upon hours to work out a poem. The ones that come spontaneously are gifts, and have little to do witht he writers craft. Don't give up.
on I hate people by Bazilla
16 Sep 2002, 3:04 PM
I don't hate you, but I hate this poem. Stop wasting time beating the air. Not to mention this lacks anyhting resembling charm
on Mountain Ash, Mid Glamorgan by Nicholas Jones
16 Sep 2002, 2:23 PM
More than like, I love. 10 fully earned.
replying on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
16 Sep 2002, 1:25 PM
Are you raising the babes solo?
on God and Country by dougsoderstrom
16 Sep 2002, 7:34 AM
Amen. Excellent. Folk-art at it's very best. May I print and share?
on crispy by skaskowski
15 Sep 2002, 10:22 PM
why's it called crispy if it's crunchy? S.O.g.