on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 11:28 AM
despite the ongoing comments by other people, I liked this it even made me go read more of your stuff....
on May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!
19 Oct 2007, 6:30 AM
not comment worthy....
on My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable
19 Oct 2007, 6:26 AM
a sigh and a tear...very heartfelt. Keep writing love
on 'Till Then by sliver
24 Sep 2007, 8:50 PM
beautifully expressed, thank you for sharing this part of your life with all of us out here
on crying tears by NeeMan
24 Sep 2007, 11:30 AM
I love it, but here(PR) my opinion never counts for much but to be bashed!I don't care, I love it anyway
learning a language is not always by dictated use of a word defined in a dictionary much as in engish a foreigner may not understand why teenage girls call a guy "hot" or "cool" and that the referance is good but cold or burnt is bad.....
When I was adopted I inherited a great family,Grandma taught me well and my elders
17:13-17:15 Koran
And We have made every man's actions to cling to his neck, and We will bring forth to him on the resurrection day a book which he will find wide open:
Read your book; your own self is sufficient as a reckoner against you this day.
Whoever goes aright, for his own soul does he go aright; and whoever goes astray, to its detriment only does he go astray: nor can the bearer of a burden bear the burden of another, nor do We chastise until We raise an apostle
When I was adopted I inherited a great family,Grandma taught me well and my elders
17:13-17:15 Koran
And We have made every man's actions to cling to his neck, and We will bring forth to him on the resurrection day a book which he will find wide open:
Read your book; your own self is sufficient as a reckoner against you this day.
Whoever goes aright, for his own soul does he go aright; and whoever goes astray, to its detriment only does he go astray: nor can the bearer of a burden bear the burden of another, nor do We chastise until We raise an apostle
replying on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
21 Apr 2005, 9:05 PM
funny how you are so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief that I need to alter my appearance..... though my comment referance was to your internal ugliness. To see beyond the surface is one of my abilities, yet one of your inabilities.As far as my intellect, my stats are just fine though I feel no need to brag with numbers.... yet another thing I leave to the unfortunately less esteemed... I write to connect with others and share views... and I feel no reason to bash anyone in the manner which you do. .....For a loser that is so envious of me it cracks me up that you took the time to look up my website....and view only my pictures!
The sanctimonious live hollow lives!
The sanctimonious live hollow lives!
replying on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
20 Apr 2005, 7:27 PM
A comedian you are not... though you should change your handle to TOAD as without ever seeing your face your ugliness shows quite well
on A new leaf by Damien
20 Apr 2005, 7:20 PM
keep going Damien.....chin up chin up,no one ever got to their destination looking at their feet!
on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
20 Apr 2005, 7:17 PM
I edited the title since some of the MORONS that read here are trying to be comedians.....and doing a pathetic job at it
on 15 Minute poem by Damien
18 Apr 2005, 9:05 PM
Hey Damien, nice piece, have u ever considered stand up in NY? I could set u up w/ some people that would love ya....set u in motion to where u should be already on TV...get in touch ellasona@yahoo.com
on Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien
18 Apr 2005, 9:02 PM
keep it up....I'll always read what u got cummin'
on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
18 Apr 2005, 8:57 PM
Finally, someone on this site with a brain & talent,the only nasty comments U will get is from those you speak of.....deeply enjoyed this one, you should be doing stand up though.....Def poetry Jam would love you....Ella
on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2004, 7:29 PM
nice....
replying on My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote
8 Feb 2004, 6:58 PM
thanks, don't know much about structured writing I just write what I feel,but I did what u said, best I could....better?
on My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote
7 Feb 2004, 10:06 PM
don't care if no one likes this....just had to get this day off my chest....
on You Know Not by broken_wing11
30 Jan 2004, 9:06 PM
I like it but feel after 2 readings that there is a small suggestion....add the word time after night in 8th line...flow would be smoother