on Wake Up by unouluvme
27 Jul 2004, 11:29 AM
doesnt make sense? i didnt think so.
on Las Gaviotas by Bachus
2 Apr 2004, 4:01 PM
REALLY REALLY nice!
on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus
2 Apr 2004, 4:02 PM
okay
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2004, 4:05 PM
okay, i supposer
on simply missing by daggatolar
28 Feb 2004, 5:35 PM
I like it, the no-spaced words are hard to read, ut its got a nice ring to it
on Standing Still by capachijim
28 Feb 2004, 5:38 PM
is this 3 haikus? cause i think a haiku ONLY has 3 lines???
on How to sleep sitting up by Bachus
28 Feb 2004, 5:41 PM
I really like this one. Not that i dont like it, but do the last lines work with the rest?
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2004, 5:44 PM
no wonder that this one is in the "best" category! Really nice.
on Oh No! by foothangingoutofass
28 Feb 2004, 5:47 PM
1. this isnt exactly deep.
2. Your name seriously scares me
3. okay the rymes need some work
yeah, okay, i think a 1 will do.
2. Your name seriously scares me
3. okay the rymes need some work
yeah, okay, i think a 1 will do.
on lullaby by the indign
2 Apr 2004, 3:05 PM
This isnt my style, but it isnt bad...like the descriptions
on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2004, 3:25 PM
nice...cutesy a bit, but nice.
on love comes but once by francis nor capule
2 Apr 2004, 3:27 PM
cutesy ish...most definetly not my style, but ill give you a 4 bc i dont judge to harshly
on Im innocent by Horus9
2 Apr 2004, 4:07 PM
no...this is supposed to be what? funny? deep? i seriously dont like it.
on Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme
5 Apr 2004, 5:23 PM
what word could i use on the "soon to turn green" instead of the word "green"
on some deleted poem
27 Jan 2005, 3:53 PM
thats not even yours
on Activating your Infinity by horus8
27 Jan 2005, 3:54 PM
to much like a story
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
27 Jan 2005, 4:09 PM
what the fuck?
on Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot
10 Jan 2007, 1:52 PM
wow. if you really did this you're a bitch.but it does make a good poem.
on May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!
10 Jan 2007, 1:54 PM
what a load of crap. i get the feeling youre not really a christian
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2007, 1:57 PM
this is cute but in a mature way (if thats possible.) i like it.