on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 4:11 PM
Are you really 17? Because if so I am feeling quite smooth criminal. Pretty good stuff. Right-o.
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 2:00 PM
Did I trash one of your haikus? I didn't give you that blue two either.
on Maliced flame by T'ien
26 Nov 2002, 7:08 PM
And you are sending this off to Slayer tomorrow morning. What crap. The British are coming, the British are cuming. I h8 ur shit cuz it is jus realeee bad.
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 7:17 PM
Well, Melinda, you are 14. Puberty has got you down, and let me tell you, it does not get any better from here on out. Pure acne.
on ode to horus by daniella
26 Nov 2002, 6:56 PM
Horus is a goof and a poem will not change that.
on Boxers Over Y-Fronts by un4208
26 Nov 2002, 7:01 PM
And your point; besides being a new nitwit. Go find a nice closet to hide in.
on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8
26 Nov 2002, 7:05 PM
Would that not be the ocean Hollywood beat man.
on Make Me A pie by un4208
26 Nov 2002, 7:03 PM
I realse the Brits have the Shakespearean chip on the shoulder, but has you humor really sunk to the depths of this crap. It would not even be funny in Texas and they laugh at everything. Go beat off to your pictures of the Queen and save us the misery of reading your shit.
on "My Love" by wickedemon4
26 Nov 2002, 7:10 PM
Pimple poem deluxe. It is true. In one week the site has gone to complete hell. Cannot you people just go to the journal sites and spew your nonsense. Are you British?
on The Social Muse by w~* ATHENA *~w
22 Nov 2002, 9:46 AM
Well now, I shall put it here. Considering Mr. Elliot, a Misery boy if there ever was one, wrote a plethora of obscure material, none of which , racist and all, made it to the London and New York stage, why would you choose one of the most well known ditties in his arsenal? And why compare yourself to the now deceased God's Wife who, due to yet another monthly bloodletting, has packed her poems and pulled an Amelia on us all. So you tell me who is the Gwen and who is the poet, besides neither in this case.
on Variance of the tapeworm by horus8
20 Nov 2002, 6:53 PM
Here is some hard hittin' power babble now. Lock up the kids, were goin' poetry reading tonight.
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 1:34 PM
They told me you were dead. Settle will lie this one.
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 1:40 PM
I hate when titles are in the poem. It is such song lyric mentality. A title should stand on its own. I saw a bumper sticker the other day on a car that said, "abortion is the fruit of nuclear war." It was homemade and spanned the entire bumper. I thought about this and even brought it up to my students who sat with curious looks on their grad student faces. Anyone out there care to suggest what this one means. DA?
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 1:45 PM
Is this like a rap song?
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 1:55 PM
Does this mean you no longer love me? Could you write me and tell me why I deserve this treatment.
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 1:57 PM
Well it has the sort of hip hop rhythm going for it, which is cool. I didn't give you that two if that is why you called me asshole.
on missing you by Goose
19 Nov 2002, 10:14 PM
I agree with Christof Cad and goose.