on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 9:32 PM
size doesn't count
on A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 10:12 PM
Fucking brilliant!!!! Mega 10.
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 6:42 PM
Hey this comes up as much as hunt in peck? DA are you nentwined or just a hacker?
on A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 10:56 PM
It is not pretty. It is brillant!!!! and God's Wife is on vacation!
on the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o
29 Aug 2002, 10:58 PM
Wow, look at that form!! Brillant poem!!
on A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 11:12 PM
I am not following you. I am reading the comments. And clicking. Procrastinating job...and okay it is pretty brillant!!!!
on A Love in the Distance by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 10:34 PM
I love you too, Baby. Why is baby a proper noun, though? Is there someone else? Who will stick up for you when I am gone. This is true art. I am hanging it on my wall.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
29 Aug 2002, 8:43 PM
Oh fuck, another newbie, here we go again.
on Thousand Tears by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 8:51 PM
"Do you hear me/Do you care?" I could not finish this poem, sorry. But it is pure genius. Pure genius.
on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 10:08 PM
I never said anything about the theme. I was merely analyzing the merits of a LIMERICK that was making an attempt at humor. Besides the poets peeps and, of course, the razorgirl, and maybe even Bachus, if his mother watching Letterman and he has had a few would find this the least bit interesting.
on Plugged Up Nose by PK
29 Aug 2002, 10:10 PM
See Ming Merciless, whose attempt also sucks, to see exactly how clever this poem is not. Everybody with a Gallagher sense of humor is doing it.
on Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 10:15 PM
I feel you honey.... I fell the loss...the leave...fall..ing...i am..afraid.. of ;;; falling--- asleep000before... i fin--ish ..the first ..line. Absoulte brillance. More, please, more....
on Uncertainty by nentwined
29 Aug 2002, 10:18 PM
This has come up four times in the last six entries. What is so random about that? It is a communist plot!!
on 'The Grey' Triplet by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 10:32 PM
Oh god, another clever ditty. I went to the star trek convention here in misery and I met that robot and you know what--he was not a robot after all. It killed me to find out that everything i thought was real on TV was just made up. Well at least I have these conventions and david eddings and the hobbit and oh, yes, lovecraft--go go, Cthulhu, go.
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 5:49 PM
This is er...rubbish. Is it even your poem? And why is it you have become so silent now that brazen has pounced upon the fact you are a hack and plagiarist. Defend your crap now young man. Why don???t you just delete the remaining number of the shit you call poems and go hide in your cave in disgrace? Regarding the above poem. It is not good, no matter who the author.
on Comparisons by anagram
29 Aug 2002, 5:54 PM
Pub quizzes, you like pub quizzes. I???m coming over and we are going out tonight. I ???am the greatest??? at pub quizzes. Fuck poetry, fuck the 14 year old angst, I???m going drinking with the anagram.
on Comparisons by anagram
29 Aug 2002, 6:40 PM
I am sorry to hear that anagram, I really am. I have a lot to say on the subject, but am just finding ways to say it. Wish him a few more pub quizzes and many more frothy pints.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
29 Aug 2002, 6:57 PM
Excuse me for my ignorance of scot pigeon but what the hell is a scratcher?
on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit
29 Aug 2002, 4:18 PM
Some thirteen people (babies and elderly) have died from it (that is equal to 5000 per one in developing countries). It is an epidemic!! And horses, many, many horses have perished. The stock shows will have to postpone until the ponies grow!!! Don't you like horses, D.A.? Don't you?
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 4:31 PM
Such a scholarly lad, but I must agree, too many birds. Where is Hitchcock when you need him? The last line is most rewarding and the journey itself I like, but when you are there in the tomb of tomes, I find myself doing what I most often do in the middle of the night reading such academic delights: nodding off. Great work though!!!! E.T would be proud.